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Oh my goodness! I just realized that I forgot to add one of the most important points of my review! Please don't make Sasuke a smoker! I don't mean to offend anyone, but there is nothing un-sexier than a smoker. Of course the decision is up to you, but smoking is a HUGE turn off. I've even stopped reading some stories because I can't stand the habit, whether it’s in real life or in a story, I just can't stand it. Anyway, that's all. My best wishes for you and your writing.



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Yay! Nice beginning ^.~

I'd really like to read more from this :D

Brilliant. Wicked. Fantastic. I love this fic. And your style of writing... I almost felt as if I was sitting in the café myself! The descriptions of places and people is almost painfully perfect.

*sigh* After reading so many bad fics, it's really great to read one as good as this; at least it keeps my brain somewhat intact to read a story with no typo's and lots of quality.

You're really talented at writing. I hope you'll continue writing this story!

how about naming it hmm "Sweet Latte" instead? lol
jp =3
aww i think it's cuuuuute!
me lyke me lyke lol
i love blushy sasuke

Great start. Can't wait to read more!

This is a great start, the feel and dialogue used gives it a strong sense of realism. Can't wait to read more!! :)

You do a great job making this entirely realistic, though Sasuke's note did sound a little off from the way you wrote his speech and the general tone of the fic. But I applaude you for starting a college fic that for once is more original then the roommates idea. I like this set up better especially since every college has a cafe like this. It was funny to see that you put the cost of the chem book in there but I'd almost say to take it out since it kind of disrupts the flow. Your comment later about it being expensive is all you'd really need. You do a wonderful job of keeping them in character, and their interaction is done very smoothly. Can't wait to see more!

Wow, I really like it so far :)! Please you have to update, YOU MUST, pretty please with sugar on top ^-^!!!

Woot! Great fic you've got going here. It's absolutely perfect.

I can especially relate to the college life. Just started my first year and I have a ridiculously priced Chem book too. I wish I could finds such an awesome place to study. I might actually get something done... Then again, if guys that looked like Naruto and Sasuke were around, I'd get as much done as I do when I'm reading fanfics.

I hope you update soon. I can't wait for their first date^.^

gosh, this was funny! i don't know if that's what your were going for, but it wasn't so much funny as in "that's hilarious," but funny as in "romantic comedy." that might have just confused you - hell, it confused me ^___^;;

anyway, this is really sweet! i'd really like to read more, so update soon!