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by sharinganswirl

schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, Sasuke got socked (I think)! *cheers* I'm so glad Naruto didn't get weepy, as he sometimes tends to do in fanfic. I'm wondering if Naruto is gonna explain the reason behind his closeness with Gaara that night, Sasuke didn't even wait for an explanation! That's so like him though, so great job on the characterizations for both of them! ^__^ I can't wait for the next chapter. This has been an awesome story since day one, and this is such an interesting twist in the story! Most people are too scared to do the big time jumps, but you went for it and handled it wonderfully. Amazing job :D
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope they can work out this misunderstanding. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person Natha
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello there,

your story was good till I stopped reading it mid-chapter three. Why is that? Because instead the "promised" NaruSasu this is plain "SasuNaru" and I do not like Naru as an uke. So please label it correctly, because I myself can't stand the same boring SasuNaru-thingies and when one of the rare promising NaruSasu-labelled stories turn into just another SasuNaru things... I simply don't like it.

Sorry if this seems just like an useless rant or unimportant...
Nathaniel
person VRon8899
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Several other wrods running through my mind...wow...hurry up and get that next chapter up!!!!!!!
person oraday
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, for a second I thought 'it's over?' I had thought you just got lazy and decided to end the story with some cliche happily-ever-after. Man, I was seriously gonna complain.

Then... I read the part about Naruto's heart-break and I was completely confused. Wah! It's so sad that Sasuke's such a goddamn idiotic bastard. When it comes to being oblivous, he can even beat out Naruto. I'm glad he got punched. He deserved it for not giving Naru-chan a chance to explain.

Well, at least things will be moving forward and their relationship will be fixed. Ah, the make-up sex is gonna be great. Heh, I'm such a perv.

Sooo... Whatever happened to the thing with Neji and Sai. And Gaara-chan... What happened to him. Hee, I love side-plots.

Okay, I hope you get to finishing chappie 6 soon. I really want to read it^.^
person puccachu
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wah~
i love how characters dun c each other after years~
n still think about each other~~
kyah! *heart*
love how the story is unfolding~~!
sasuke crying is just so cute!! <3
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Interesting with a touch a fun. I can't wait for more. For a title this might be lame but what about "When I see you smile"? For some reason that song kept running through my head from the moment I started reading your fic
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
naruto decked him?! well, i can see that. i mean, he should have a least talked to naruto. i'm sure what he saw was gaara's unrequited love... or something... omg, you have to update soon!! get that 1/4 of a chapter done already! now! i demand it! ^.~
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*drools* you have to keep going its getting so good
person animehead
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ugh!!! I had to wait forever for this update and now you leave me with a cliffy! *drops down to knees and sobs* Why are you doing this to me?! Why?! WHY?!

*sniffles, stands up, and clears throat* I mean...I mean that was a great chapter. I really like this story, and I can't wait to see what happens next! Gods! But I will wait patiently for you update (not like a have a choice).