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its really hot

that chappie was just too cute!!! i swear it's hard to find someone who will love ya that deep and sasuke has a pure angelic keeper in his arms! one who can bottom oh so well.... -snickers- poor neji will prolly have to crash over at hinata's place.

I love this story!!! Please continue writing it's great!

I have to say that this is the sweetest most beautiful romantic fic I have ever read. It was so wonderful and amazing and full of love and happiness. So sweet. I will love you forever for this. The transistion from Naruto at work, to at the park, and then to Sasuke's room was all perfect! I am so happy that you shared this with us!

*snifs*
you scared me
i tho stopped this story
i was exciting read the new chapter
both of them are so sweet n luvin. hehe

Bah, you don't really need a beta, this chapter was wonderful. The emotions were conveyed extremely well. I definitely believed that Sasuke and Naruto just fell in love, however abrupt. It was just so befitting and it seemed like everything from before was just leading up to that point. Ah! It was so awesome!!!

Oh, the smut was hot!!! But I think it was even better than anything I've read before. It was real lovemaking and that made it so great. Wah, I just feel so happy having read this. It was truly beautiful...

'Kay, I think if I keep blabbing, I'll start talking like Gai-sensei so I'mma stop...

Just, don't worry about taking your time. You write long chapters that are very well structured so the wait isn't really bad at all^.^

Yay! I've missed this story so much! I was so excited when I saw an update from you! Acutally, I haven't read the most recent chapter. My kids and husband are distracting me, but when it's quiet I will read it, and leave you a proper review!

I just found this story and this one line had me going .

"Iruka’s face split into a grin. ‘My, my, looks like Naruto is twitterpated!’"

Now to the next chapter.

I can almost see it . Making out in the park and then I think maybe it went a little to far?

omg, you updated!! and what are you talking about? this chapter was great! though i would have liked to read the conversation between iruka and naruto about why he was so happy, even though kakashi had mostly already confirmed why. and in the last chapter, you said you had them going fast because you had "plans," and with them confessing everlasting love in chapter 4, i certainly hope whatever you have planned isn't too heartbreaking. heartbreak makes me cry.

anyway, great job!! i look forward to your next update!!