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for The Café

by sharinganswirl

schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love . They are so cute . Will be looking for more.
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.....that was os awsome!!!! I totally love it!!! It's got hot Naruto and Sasukeness and it's just so awsome!!! What if Neji did open the door? That would be awkward....though it might turn into a three some...but then again Sasuke IS really possesive...hmm. Anyway great story and I can't wait until ya update!!!!

-Jason ^_-
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I logged on just to review this story. I fell in love with it from chapter one and read the four chapters here in one sitting. Good job. I hope you update soon. BTW, that last chap, wasn't bad at all, for having been written during a writer's block. I know thats tough. Either way, you could always tweak it later on.
person punkin02
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Did Neji get with Sai? Is that why he didn't come home?
person VRon
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really sweet, great idea ^^ I can't wait till the next chapter and anyone's (or everyone's?) reaction to Sasuke's proclaimed sexuality XD Nicely done I give you props!
person oraday
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woot! That was an awesome chapter. I loved Naru's fox costume. God, I can just imagine him dancing in it. :drools: I don't think the relationship is moving too fast, though that could be because I completely enjoyed that lemon. Sooo hot!

Heh, I wish Neji could have been paired with Gaara, but I'm thinkin' the NejiSaiNeji pairing won't be bad.
person **Hinata**
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again, great chapter XD I would like to see Naruto in hand cuffs ... with Sasuke, yes, slight bondage!!! Please!

Hinata-chan
person mike~
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.... that was really hot

thx for the chapter, a jealous sasuke, a lustful fox, and "sexy back" all into one = couldn't be better!

i await ur next update!
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter and I love this story. The costumes were cute. I also loved Neji's skills with Sai, he's soooo smooth.
*Mystic*
person Hello
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I wonder where Neji is...cough*withsai?*cough Totally different from what I read. Nice update. :p