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very nice thank you for sharing and i for one would love to find another part to this tale as its very well done

I think you could continue with another six chapters or so but at the same time you ended it pretty well with love.

So i say it was a good ending. Ah hell you know we're just going to read whatever you write anyway. So get more writing done if not on this one then on another one of your charming stories.

Awww! Sasuke and Naruto babies. Don't we yaoi fangirls love them so? This was a sweet fic.

I was all O.O when Sasuke was doing Naruto in front of everybody. Good thing he really liked Naruto or he might not have been able to keep his little soldier saluting.

^_^ Thanks for the sweet read! ~ Jelp

Oh this story was nice. Okay it was weird with Sasuke's 'doing it in front of the hokage'-thing. But in the end it all worked out just fine. *wink* Yeah I definitely liked it.

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I really enjoyed this story, it was well written and I would love to see you continue it.

I found this story yesterday and I couldn't get enough of it. I love the ending, so beautiful.

I would love for more of this story if that ever happens. I would love to know if they have more kids (I'm sure they would love to have more) and what else comes in their relationship.

I have enjoyed your story Plans of Hebi. And I plan on reading your other stories as well, they are very well written.

Good job.

That was a good story i was waitying for the updates for that. Good work i like your stories. keep up the good woork =]!! Love Em

Thank you for continuing with the story. I really love how you ended it. It was so sweet. Since you're done with this story, any chance you could continue with "To Regain What Was Lost" I really loved that story.

oh please give them a second child