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by littleolmee

person Briryan
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this so far!) I can't wait to read how Naruto will react to what Sasuke has planned for him. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person wendyghost
schedule November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what is the seal for? vampire Naruto! go"! love sasunaru! sorry great story, update soon!
person Trisha
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story but at the end of the second chapter it seemed like Sasuke was going to do the whole jutsu right there doesn't he have to cut him open to do that? And if so woudln't any of the ninja around try to stop him because they think he's hearting Naruto? Please update soon!
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I must say that you're one of my favorite writters, I like very much where you are going with this story, I'll like to read more of fit in the near future, so please update soon.
person Izzy
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XDXDXDXD i love it!!!! can you email me when you update plzzzzzzz i really wanna see the rest!!!! well cough read the rest XD anywasyyyyy my email is "edward_elric_forever15@yahoo.com" so plz email me? oh and i can tell that u have done ur reserch, very informative
person Angelic D.J.
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chappie two, even better, awesome work you did on that chapter :D!! I look very forward to chapter threebee (WEEEEEEEE AUTHOR BE PRAISED XD!)
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh... please... more... I am addicted!! So smooth... nyan!!! Please!!1 I am looking forward to this one, nyan! That's for sure!! loved the way everything flowed...nyan! I could almost see it! Great job!
person Jadejj
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah is Sasuke going to do it infront of everyone? In the street? Good story
person Sunset Serenity
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting. I wonder if Sasuke's jutsu will be successful. Naruto was so trusting, well... Please update soon.
person dana
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. now i get why you say noncon. why is sasuke got to be a rapist. did he really have to do that or did you just throw that in there for your own amusement (oh and mine too). can't wait for the next update.