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by littleolmee

person chibimel
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This sounds very interesting, can't wait until the next chapter. I can't wait to see how Sasuke tries to do this. I am definitely very intriguied. Keep it up.
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh... I shiver at the possibilities!!! Please do update as soon as possible... your Sasuke is so intriguing and cool! The images and rationalization of the ways to get Naruto pregnant are scary but heck, cloning is a reality already. I love it when fics are steeped in truth and imagination! Kudos to you! Very well done! I cant wait!!! Nyan!!! *dances happily and curls up to wait near her computer, a stash of chocolate close by* I am waiting, nyan! ^.^ You can take your time... but make it goooooddd and looonggg... nyan!!! ne? Thanks!
person Adela
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You do realise that you just made Sasuke impregnate six different men as test subjects right?
person Angelic D.J.
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you got here :D! I want to know what happens next, I MUST KNOW XD! Please update as soon as you can, pretty please with sugar on top ^-^!!!
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love, write more.
person Clemen
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, look very intersting. Hope you update soon. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Take care and god bless.
person mscs3
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea another story! I voted for you on TONFA! Looking forward to the next chapter and Regain. Me
person Phe (who can't be bothered to log in)
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful. Generally, MPregs just happen and the story runs with it. Ocassionally, there's a given reason, and while many of them are plausible, given the characters and their limitations, I thought your take was very unique. Making it science based First, chakra based Second, was ingenious. I hope to see more of this soon.

I can't wait to see how you've had Naruto grow. ;p
person SheWolfe7
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting story. Very curious to see how things play out.

Update when you can, soon I hope!

-SheWolfe7
person whitewolf
schedule November 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this story sooooooooooo much you just have to make more chapters
please please oh please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

whitewolf
P.S. try to make the chapters soon