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by littleolmee

schedule May 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwww


That story made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. ^^
person Trish
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved that last chapter! It was very well written!
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(holding tissue up to nose) Oh man that was good, drool and nosebleed inducing, not to mention a kinda fluffy feeling. I just love your writing style and will look forward to a new story. Out of curiosity the two seamstresses who were gossiping, are they gonna get in trouble with Naruto?
person dana
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if ever you need a sentry to guard your door while you write let me know ok. i come with an array of weapons and a not afraid to use them to support blazin writers. i loved this ending and yes i know saddly it is the end. but i have comfort in knowing that i still have a fic or two of yours that is still going on. thanks for the great story.
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniff**sniff* I'm going to cry! It was a very well done story. T_T just sooo sweet at the end.
person Zrina
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was absolutely gorgeous. The depths of the emotions was wonderfully portrayed and the relationship between the three of them was so sweetly done. And the smut was yummy!! hehe

/much love your way!!
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW.

Even if for some reason this isn't continued i think i can be satisfied with this. It's so nice how everything came together in the end. Very sweet. It serves at least one last chappie though i think. Anyway, nice job.
person AoiKitsune
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dat was really touchin!! i really liked it...n i hope
for either an update oe sequal soon. well, ja ne best
of luck. AoiKitsune =^-^=
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story!!! I loved the lemon and the love you showed between them. So romantic and a happy ending! I would read more of this too, if you decide to add more. :)
schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i've waited for forever it seems for you to update this. its simply amazing, and i for one cant wait for more. so please continue to update i want to see their relationship develope and their sons reaction to it, also will they have more children? hope so.