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by littleolmee

person malina
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how about the punch from sakura? i'm really really really grateful that u continued w/ this story. the last chapter just didn't feel like an ending at all. i know ur probably not gonna like this but i have to ask anyway. one more chapter please (x3). another chapter w/ lemon on it. then continue updating "to regain what was lost". by the way i like how sasuke accept his fate as long as his w/ his family. i thought that was soo sweet.
thanks you
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you continued!! and sasuke came home!! YATTA!! this was great. and i wouldn't mind one more chapter, but if you don't do it, this is also a good place to stop.

i look forward to your next work!!
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this and i hope u update soon
person dana
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i bow to your superior greatness and glory. thanks for writing another chapter to this story even though it was finshed. i so loved how you did this chapter especially everyone coming up and just banging sasuke in the face (ha ha ha). i vote that you have one more chapter with sasxnar smut because naruto deserves to at least have some sweet loving one time without the audience (at least the written kind). can't wait to see how you truly end the story this time. will there be any more kids. can't wait to find out.
person lo
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHH... So you gave the readers some closure. That was a sweet ending, nice work.
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT MADE ME CRY >.< okay, so it was probably something to do with how freaking tired i am right now, but whatever, the story was great but the ending, *GAH* please please please make a sequel quick, because, poor naruto, sasuke could be dead somewhere and he'd have to raise a kid all by himself *whibble* loves
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i could kill you! bad very bad! I wanna know what happened!
person trulywicked
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaaaaaaay! Follow up story! (glomps you) Oh I'm so happy! Thank you!
person redtatsu
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A sequel would be wonderful. Your ending just kinda left hanging there. I look forward to see how you are going to do it. Will Sasuke be back as himself or not? I will guess I will have to wait and read it. Good Luck!
person dana
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
contrary to popular beleif i do not think you should be killed just slightly tortured like your leaving me (sike). i like where you ended this story. it's more like life if you can undestand what i mean. not everything is so easily solved. that does not mean that i can't wait for the sequel because i want to see what a kid between those two would look like. congrats on your job. hope everything goes well.