rate_review Reviews

is that really the end or a cruel cruel joke that you are playing on one of your avid fans.how could such a cool story end like that. are you writing a sequel like immediately. will sasuke come back in time for the birth or will he show up years later after the child has grown up. so many questions and it seems like you are going to play hard to get with the answers. what ever i have to do in order for you to get your story writing mojo back just let me know.

i love this story almost as much as to regain what was lost

that was good even if it did seem unfinish

oh no! you can't end it there! please! that would be just cruel! usually i don't like mpreg, but i found the concept behind this story very unique and interesting. i think you are an incrediably gifted writer, your stories always make me really happy, and i'm begging you to please continue. i was really looking forward to seeing Sasuke and Naruto playing house in this one. so, thanking you in advance (but no pressure) ...

Wha? You mean that there's only four chapters to this fic?(whimpers and eyes fill with tears) You HAVE to continue or at least make a sequal, please please please I love this and I so want to see a happy ending.(Falls to knees and folds hands and begs)Pretty please with naked Sasuke and Naruto on top? Pleeeeease?

Woman, you better continue writing this thing. I'm in love with it. You wrote it in such a way that I could actually see this happening in the Naruto world. I'd even offer to beta but college is being a b*tch and I'm constantly writing papers that /I/ haven't even written anything new since this semester started. Hell, I don't care if you just write an epilogue! Just write something; it needs a more...conclusive ending.

Also, sorry I haven't been able to review lately; I'm hardly able to finish reading a chapter a night because I have so many assignments. I think my teachers are trying to kill me...

oh

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god!

how could you just leave it like that?! naw, just kidding. it actually reminds me of something i would do. in fact, i think i did do it once... anyway, i loved it! the medical stuff kinda freaked me out. i mean, sasuke and evil medical jutsu is a mix one must take in small doses, but at least it made your story unique. others would have just had the uchiha discover that kyuubi could enable naruto to have children.

man, i hope you write a sequel, where maybe sasuke comes back to find naruto and his son very happy, but he is being sentenced to death, and he only has a few days to spend with his family, but somehow, in the end, he's not killed...

yeah, my muse runs away with me sometimes. anyway, great job. i look forward to your next story! or another chapter in one of your unfinished pieces, whichever comes first. ^__^

*shokes with the popcorn*

I would do the same thing if I was your beta.

But as you said, you get more with sugar than with vinegar.

So I'll tell you that I liked this chapter very much, the sex scene was great and Naruto was very happy with the fact that he is going to have a family of his own.

And I do hope that you write another story to tell the rest of us what happens next!

I don't know if you're reading my other story... if you ever read it let me know, because I wil really like too hear your opinion, just don't be too mean if you don't like it please?

Oh my what has happen to Sasuke and will the child Naruto having will be a boy or girl? Good story...

I love this story so far. I hope Sasuke is alive and comes home to Naurto and their child soon. Please continue!!