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by littleolmee

person mE
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!! How can you do this?! I kind a understand and kind a don't. It'd be too normal if Sasuke just came back and it'd be all happy happy, but still.. why? But either way, I really loved this story. Part of me wanted to know what's going to happen and part of me doesn't. But thank you. This was one of the best stories I've read in a while. Good work and quickly start the next one!! And with more and more and more action!! With your style.. I'm dying on nosebleed now, so I can't even imagine what would happen with story that had even more action! :D so keep up the good work. We yaoimaniacs need people like you. You're our daily drug! :D Thanks<3
person Sama
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg please please write another story to this! AHHH! I wanna know what happens! LOL awesome story though and I can't wait until the next story comes out! Ttul!
person Briryan
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Love to read the sequel when you write it. Kinda wanna know what Naruto had. It is a boy or a girl and did Sasuke come back? Could you email me if you and when you do put up the sequel? Please and thank you.
person Avonne
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I was a little surprised at where you left it, but it leaves alot open for interpretation - so I hope you decide to write a sequel! I'd really like to know if Sasuke returns safely to Naruto and the baby!
person Izzy
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what!!! ur not adding on???? i hate you!!! omg it was getting sooooo gooooooooooooood, there hasn'tbeen a yaoi sasunaru mpreg anywhere!!! like this anyway.....but i ove you for writing it =D have fun and write more, i lve ur style
person lo
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am really getting into this. I can't wait to see what you do with this next.
person Demonrights
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* great ending I do the open eneded thing a lot and people love me and hate me for it you should go check out my story dreama devils dream tonight if you feel like it. Really great story five stars JA
person mgp
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how meticulously Sasuke does everything... in front of everyone! So funny. Hm, can't wait to see how a pregnant Naruto acts.
person tricia
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Demonrights
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yey you updated, I really enjoyed this chapter poor Tsunade though she must really be frustrated and freaked out, well anyways update when you can ^_^ _demonrights