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by littleolmee

person dana
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this just keep getting better and better. not only are they doing wrong things to naruto (in my eyes now with his consent) i can't help but now feel bad that everybody was watching. are you going to have sasuke gone for a long period of time or is he going to get to see te cute picture of naruto pregnant. can't wait to see your next update
person yura
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a mean moment to stop the chapter!

Sasuke is putting up quite a show indeed, I wonder how'll he manage to flee after that, with Tsunade and Jiraiya up for his head...

Please update as soon as possible!
person mE
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg!! This is probably one of the best fics I've ever read. Not just because of the plot, but the fact that you're writing from Sasukes perspective. I've never seen a fic like that. I love it! It's usually Narutos point of view in SasuNaru fics and Naruto fics in general. And besides I haven't seen a good, sorry I mean SUPERDOPERGREAT!!, SasuNaru fic in ages. They're usually AU or poorly written, but yours.. WOW! But I'll stop now or you'll think I'm only fooling around :D Thanks for this fic and keep up the great work! Hope to see the fourth chapter soon, 'cause I have very low tolerance for waiting! ;D Thanks again, luv ya!! <3 :DD
person Maddie
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far!!!! Please update asap!
person lo
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this and it is weel written. Nice job! I 'm so impressed. I can't wait to see more.
person HisNameIsMyNM2
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. I hope to see another chapter soon. Keep up the good work.
person Clemen
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't review the second chapter, I forgot. But here I am, wow poor naruto with everyone watching. Very original. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Hope you update soon. Take care and god bless.
person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omfg!...and that pretty much sums it up. nice work!
person Izzy
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i am now a loyal fan to this story!!!! omg i love it, it explains everything to well!!! i feel bad for the 5th though, hehe naruto is like a little brother to her. i hope sasuke servives!! wait, of course he will...rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrright?(smirks) "because if he doesn't you know i'm gonna kill you :D" (jk, but really) u know what i mean, anyway...i can't wait!!! this story is heading inn a great direction, but i wish that sasuke would have done all this in a more privite place... hehe keep up the good work!!! i'll check soon
person Sama
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!! I love, absolutely love this story! You have to update and soon! Please! I can't wait for the next capture! Awesome girly! Ttul!