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Oh my ... And they aren't done yet. Sasuke better run as fast as he can when the walls come down...

This is great so far so don't take to long on the next chapter

perverted but very, very nice... I never had Sasuke pegged as an exibitionist, but that was way too hot, nyan... I just hope he remember to scram when he finishes...update!

ACK!! NOO! YOU CAN'T JUST STOP THERE!!!

*cries*

I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT KEEP UPDATING

Doesn't Anko have a curse seal too? did she die? XD

Please type more!! i love it so far ^_^

OMG! I love it, what's gonna happen next? I hope Sasuke survives his battle with Itachi so that
he and Naruto-kun can raise the child together.

its thourough and well written ,a bit dry but thats the nature of the subject. I'm glad he let those men go. Actualy itachi would be best but thats not to be. If those men could escape why not him? Not to be i guess, no baby.

Stupid thing!! this machine. I wanted to say that you treat women rather dismissively.Tsundae could do everything needed, now I realised her age ect. But the point is they exist! It's not that they don't exist, its that Sasuke don't get out much! He has only lived two places and runs from women anyway (point; women in sound are "crazy bitches" which means they don't have tea and sit in a home all day so that means they will be bad mothers? They swear? They'll kill. They have abrassive personalities? So does Naruto.{So do I} That was a cheap shot.).So it might be more acurate to say he has no time or disposition to look for a suitable one( who wants to ).^=^

Well Chap Two went Faster.Sasuke seems to have picked up Oro's persuasive skills anyway! Grins. Naruto 's happy. Maybe too happy (he deserves it!) but not stupid, he notes Sasuke is changed (touchy-feely). Did Sas. abort the children in the other men?He needs more than one or even ^ kids to re-new ths sharringan,if they showed up that would help his cause, I thought those seven men (if you include sasuke) together in a dungeon teaching sex to a georgeous Sas,it would make some amazing pwp side fics (big hint). Oh yeah. I actually like this, Sasuke is smooth not out of control and Naruto gave him permission, its not non con. He would have said yes I think. but how much does Sasuke know about the seal on Naruto? It seems to unwind a bit fast , more like an out-line of a story but this is still set up right? The action /dialoue 's cool.I wouldn't have wanted to see much of that battle if your battle writing skills are not above average, though I hope we see more action with Itachi. Itachi has to die ? Is he really a bad guy? He is so yonge ? And besides,you know who, is you know what and s/he is a hero. I haven't read past K's face when he sees....so I don't know what happened. Damn. Better try to get on there again. It gives me probs,that site! Good luck and thanks.