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December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man! That was sooo HOT! It's a nice story, well written, and of course, it involves Ten-Ten. I love it!
Please, hurry up with the next chapter! I'm aching to know what will happen!
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good so far but you have too write another chapter .
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lee can't use chakra. ;) Other than that, AWESOME story.
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I don't think you have much to worry about. Your writing is pretty good, and god! Neji and Tenten are SMOKING hot in this. It's not cliched and it's not too gross, yet it's got enough action to keep it heated. Can't wait for the next chapter.