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good storie i dont do narusaasu but plot wise was good

I love the happy ending and you wrote the lemon very well. :)

*Sigh* this was a NaruSasu fic....*shivers and wished you had a warning saying it was*...well I liked the first 4 chapters and umm half of 5..*sigh*

To my readers

Thank you for you're reviews and Anon thank you for you review and everything however I put it in the summery that it's a Naruto and Sasuke Fic. Sorry you didn't like it but may be next time you should try reading summeries and aurthors note.

Thank you again
~*~DemonicTenshi~*~

LOL Nurse Tenshi-Lee, I completly agree with your review. What she (or he) said!

good start, can see this going somehwere interesting....

I like the way it began with Sasuke and Sakura and lead into Sasuke and Naruto.

I like the plot line idea, I do, but I don't like the shortness of it. I feel that you can expand it a great deal more instead of shortening it like you have. Also, you have plenty of spelling mistakes in your story. I'm sorry your BETA is irresponsible about it and hasn't responded to your chapters, but if you would like a BETA, and a active one, I'm sure if you advertised for one you could get one. Or I'd be willing to BETA it for you. If you would like that, I would be happy to help you by editing ALL the chapters as your BETA person.

ok, last time i said that you had a few small mistakes, this time i say that it was VERY confusing. (i suck at spelling so it obviusly wasn't that) sometimes you had a question mark when it should be a comma or a period, and sometimes you should have started a new line for a sentence (when a difrent character starts to talk, it should be on a new indented line, not the same paragraph as the character before it, it makes it to confusing) but, i still love the plot, it rules, and it's kind of sad begining (but hot). again, if you need a beta (a person who edits and fixs the mistakes) i can help, just don't expect me to fix spelling mistakes, i suck at spelling.

'Kay, so I first read the review for the fic to know if there'd be anything I wouldn't like... There were some grammar complaints, but since they were from people who couldn't actually spell grammar, much less use punctuation correctly, I didn't take them seriously. Neither should you.

I love SasuNaru fanfiction and I read a lot. I have read some of the absolutely most horribly written things ever posted, but, because the plots were good, I didn't really mind. As for your fic, it is well written and you have a kick-ass plot.

Seriously, I don't have any problems reading this fic. People who do are half-illiterate or something. Sure, the extra question marks were a little confusing, but they didn't take away from the overall effect so I just ignored them. The point is that you were able to convey the important subjects so that I could read around the rare mispellings and punctuation weirdness.

This is an awesome fic and I really think you should continue it. Don't be discouraged by a couple of crummy reviews and pay attention to the more positive ones. One thing you can count on is that you'll always have SasuNaru addicts like me to support you, so chin up and get to writing and posting the next chapter^.^