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dude this story rocks I can't wait for more!

You know what's weird? I was thinking about this story in class and here it is updated!!!! heheh I'm so happy you finally updated!!! I feel so sorry for Naruto argh I wish Sakura just suddenly dies....reeeeaaaalll painful, you know what i mean. As for Sasuke, hmph he can get hurt real bad for all I care.

anyways I hope you get th next chapter up soon, so good luck!!!

that last sentance was so cute! but your grammer isnt that good overall good though! :)

Couple of errors here and there, but other then that I loved it!

I really hope Sasuke gets sick while waiting in the rain and I also hope some one (Neji or KIBA!!!!!!^_^) comes along and try to woo Naruto lol infront of Sasuke and Sasuke gest all jealous (because he deserves it) and we all love Jealous Sasuke, neh neh?

well update soon however it will be in the next chapter I know i will love it (unless it's some Sasuke and Sakura lemon crap thing, I might then throw up!!>_<)

Hey! You know what? I am enjoying your story so far. And if they think your grammer is bad... Lets just say I don't do alot of writing without bugging people on how to spell words. People expect perfection when reading fanfiction and sometimes don't realize that nobody is perfect. Keep writing your stories. If people can't get over grammer mistakes, then they should read something else. Well. With that aside. Whatcha got next?

I don't care about the gramar!XDDDD
I LOVED you story!XDD *LOVE,LOVE,LOVE*
Make Naruto strong(I don't really want to se him all "Ah, I forgive you sasuke!" like...to many storys for thet here already.)Make Sasuke suffer - It's time that man got to fight for what he really wants. And please for the love of God, DON'T make Sakura pragnent!

omg make Sakura pregnant!!make Sakura pregnant!!make Sakura pregnant!!Make Sasuke SUFFER Make Sasuke SUFFER Make Sasuke SUFFER and die in pain, but not really but enough to get it through his F****** head!!!muahahahahahah (and btw I also agree dont make Naruto wimpy make him and cry and forgive Sasuke just like that LET HIM HAVE SOME FUN FOR A FUCKING CHANCE lol sorry didn't mean to get angry there lol.

and the whole grammar spelling thing, don't worry about, I have grammar problem they have grammar problem we all have it along with spelling (>_
hehehe love your story!!

Nani? (regarding your Note to all)
I didn't find a poblem with your grammar. *raises an eyebrow in confusion* Who's been complaining? Anywayz, I've been meaning to ask. What the HELL is a beta??

And also, great chapter by the way, can't wait till they confront each other. Keep in mind, a jealous Sasuke, is the best Sasuke.
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Well...not really...a jealous/stalker-potential/cut-throat/maniac is the best Sasuke, lol! I'm such a crazy mofo, forgive me! Sumimasen!

^^ hiya. i really love the story idea you have going. and if you are still in need of a beta then i'd love to help you out. well i have to go. ja ne

ooooooooooooo I'm interested!!

the grammar is a little hard to read, so asking someone to beta (edit) for you may also help out.

aside from that, I'm totally interested to see why this happened, and what Sasuke will do to get her back.