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for Betrayal and Love (Finished)

by DemonicTenshi

person Yo-
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey didn't you post this once before? I know I really liked it and I still do! I hope you continue writitng it, becasue well that's just so -tear- sad. How will Sasuke fix this I wonder?
person Emma125
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't believe those two, how could they do that to Naru-chan ~_~ and not to mention poor Lee.
I hope Sasuke suffers like hell, he does not deserve Naruto's forgiveness.
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Mama likes! lol.
This is my opinion, feel free to shun it or even spit on it because I have no right to tell/ask you what to do on your story.

Naruto shouldn't be such a pansie! I hate it when he's like that. He should hold in his feelings for Sasuke and play hard to get! Until Sasuke begs! And he should act like nothing happened but make it perfectly clear that he is slightly unhappy....also I love a jealous Sasuke. Make that happen, won't you? (With Neji or Gaara?) Pleeease!

Don' mind if you don't take this on but I think it'd make it more intriguing than it already is.

Update SOOOONN!!