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for A Virgin Kiss

by Hestia

schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not telling you what I think until you update... *grins*
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I. Love. You.
REally, you have my devotion for that last chapter, that demon, hooo and the way you write it, all of it was just so cool, thanks!!!
person Allys
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I was doing a happy dance because I missed you and YAY you're back and then I started reading the chapter and was like oh God I'm scared, poor Neji and then I found myself saying, YEAH take it like a bitch and had to stop and ask... WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU DO TO ME??? =D LOL =D. Transcendance through submission, learn to accept as well as to give, S&M ZEN. And then I thought to myself ONLY YOU girly! I'm babbling here =P. ~sighs~ Thanks again for making me grin stupidly at the end of a rough day.
person Valenti
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GOD, that was good. really great- so unexpected, that it was fantastic! what a way to loose your virginity! Gaara is cute when he comes back to his senses, trying to help Neji out, only to fuck him in the end! I like the way they are lovers- I was waiting a week to read this- and now that I've have, I need to read more!! I LOVE YOU! please continue!!
person Cindy
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for Neji the uke~!
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh god woman! When I think I have read the hottest thing you can cook up you turn around to surprise me! Jesus! This is the best! @.@ *faints due to blood loss*
person Tati
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Before I started reading your fic, I had an inkling that NejixGaara was a pairing I might like. My favorites are Sasu/Naru and Kaka/Iru, but you've managed to add another obsession (as if I needed anymore) to my Naruto yaoi addiction. You wirte them scorching hot and vulnerable at the same time. That is a hard feat, to be able to strike that balance, I commend you. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for more.

person Corvin
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Zomg! Yet another flippin awesome chapter!! Oh please update soon! THIS IS THE BEST NEJI/GAARA FIC EVER!!
person Allys
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL D - Licious!!! Always LOVE a naughty Kiba! Can't wait til Gaara finally gets to fuck Neji into the ground, the bed, the sand, a chair, who cares :D!!
person crazyforkakashi
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG. HOT. I don't know what to say.