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Niiiiiiiice!

Is it me or this room is more hot now? *looks around*

Hmmm. I'd have to admit that I do enjoy this fic.

Quite a lot. I would, however, like to read about Neji being tied somewhere with Sand. Hopefully at the mercy of a painfully aroused Gaara. Neji seems to be getting a lot of top, might be fun to take turns. Hehe.
The way you portray Gaara seems to have an aspect of dominance that I'd like to see.

Mhm. Makes me fuzzy. Keep updating, I'm enjoying. :D

Damn Hestia, that was...well...I'm still trying to recover. I love Gaara, and you made me love Neji. Thanks, I hope that it doesn't take away from my Naruto/Gaara love obsession, but it might. Darn you Hestia...you made me love this pairing.

For the sake of fun, make Neji "do uke" at least once, jajaja, come on, make me more happy (because I already am, you see, you have a hot fic here, and I like it~) cool chapter!

I don't know if you did this on purpose, but i found this aww and confusing. @-@


"Yeah, damn it, that’s it, call out my name,” said Kiba, thrusting in hard again and again. “Whose cock do you want in you?”

I saw it toward the end of the story in chapter 10. It kinda thrown me off. But i guess it was a typo or something. thought i share. love your storyies!!!!!

shadow.Jinxs

...I'm speechless. Well, no I'm not. I'm too full of raging compliments. I stopped reading Naruto fanfiction for forever because I became bored, but I checked real fast and this popped out at me. Your summary is very intriguing by the way. And, point is, I'm really really really glad I came back because this is F-ING AMAZING! (sorry for the language but I'm really really passionate right now) The verbal sparring between them is great. And I'm loving the lemon scenes. They're some of the best I have ever read... Truly. And the exploding of emotions from Gaara's lust to his love to Neji's jealousy. Ugh. I'm full of envy. Fantastic. Bloody fantastic. And I wasn't even a big GaaraNeji couple. I am now though. Out of curiosity as well, in the 10th chapter, towards the middle/end of the lemon at the bottom, there's a single line/paragraph thing where it says its Kiba pounding into him, (which would make it a fantasy), is that right? I read it as a typo and mentally inserted Neji. Anyway...bloody amazing job. It was scintillating, intriguing, steamy, passionate, stupendous, erotic, spectacular, magnificent, descriptive (and I absolutely love the amount of detail you put in everything!), and captivating. I'll save some adjectives for my next review. But really, you have to update. Take your time, but update. Did I mention I like the power play between Gaara and Neji, and I like how Neji is teaching Gaara all these new concepts and how it's affecting his relationship with Temari and such? And that your story actually flows...amazing.

**Whew**

Damn, wicked good shit~!

YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Did I mention that I love this fiction?
You update so fast that I have to check everyday just to keep up!!
Thanks!!!
Gaara is just too HOT!!
So is Neji!!

rawr! Nyan! So possessive and dominant! Neji! I never thought you had it in you! nyan!!! ^.^ *fans self quickly* that was very... enlightening, nyan! Me likes a lot... Got confused once when Kiba's cock was mentioned instead of Neji's but the rest... oh god... *nods happily* wonderful!

i figured Neji would let Gaara sleep seeing as Gaara NEVER sleeps because of his demon.