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I love this story.

No wonder this story has so many hits, it's awesome!
Thanks for that great piece of work!

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Fascinating! You're the best! Hot and sweet, makes me go "Awwww" and "Ah Yes!". You make me cry and laugh... and so wet I want to beg! Hell your stories are better than some of the men I've had and darn close to as good as the women! YOU SHOULD BE PAID YOU'RE SO GOOD! Tell me you have your own characters/books published! If you don't you should!

I think i am have reviewed before but..anyway. This is my 3rd time reading this story from 1-43. It's like i crave the passion and love shown so clearly in this work. My favorite line/phrase is neji calling gaara 'love incarnate'. That has to be the most perfectly thought out phrase EVER! You are amazing!!!!!!!!! I'm sure in a few months i'll wake up with the urge to read this...again. When i do i'll leave yet another reply. I love ALL of your yaoi works, but this one holds a special place in me. It's in my top 5 fics. Out of alllllll the ones i read, from different animes, from diffrent pairings, from diffrent websites. This is one of the best EVER!!!!! I love you. You rock. Please let me serve you in anyway possible. If you need a beta or a reader or just an obsessive fan to wax on about you eternally....i'm here ^_^

TOTALLY LOVED UR FIC, I'M PLANNING ON READING SOME OF UR OTHER WORK. THIS WAS AWESOME. U SHOULD DO SOMETHING WITH NEJI BEING TOTALLY UKE. ANYWAY KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.

i am confused

you firstly say that his sand wont let him bottom and then neji tops hims thus making him bottom and he doesnt even have to fight his sand. HUH? i am so confused. but i LOVE your style

My god! I loved this. Especially the last couple of sentences. The love man!

You write wonderfull. I love your style. They are so in character and stuff

*wipes a way one tear, because the ending was beautifull*

I staret reading this fic, and I never stopped. Lets say I am glad it is finished, so that I didn't had to wait for it.

It was really good ^^

Akaatje

One of the BEST stories on this site. I continue to enjoy... Thanks!