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for A Virgin Kiss

by Hestia

person TheGingerLady
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha ohh i loved this chap! pleas update soon!
person frizzy197
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my god!!! it just gets better and better...SEXY BOOTS!!!
person tova
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome! I love how you wrote Neji and Gaara's characters, there power strugle is so Hot. I think this story is not only hot but makes a person want for the two too fall in love. I hope that you write more. I would really like to see how there relationship will develope. I think they make a good pair, they can bring each other the love they both need.
person eien no ren
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely... just lovely... This is so like a movie...nyan!! I loved this chapter too! You portray Gaara's feelings very well... can we expect you will also devote a chapter to Neji now? Nyan! Waiting as always!!!
person Jane_Lane
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is hot. Thanks for putting it out there.
person innerchild
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. gaara's all... hell, i don't know. kind of inexperieced but expereinced at the same time. heh, i make no sense, but i really do like this story. i've been stuck at my mom's and reading on my phone... instead of listening to her talk, which makes me happy. anyway, i hope u update soon. and thanks for reviewing my story! i love it when people leave me long reviews.... sry that mine's kinda lacking. my friend's yelling at me to get off the computer.

-innerchild
person Luthien Wildglen
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, there is no other way to describe this fic then to say that it is unbelievably and exceptionably HOT! Your writing style is incredibly sexy, and therefore quite alluring. I’m curious though, is this going to turn into a fic with a more in depth plot line or is it just an extended PWP? Either way I am happy because I am enthralled with this fic. I absolutely can’t wait until the next chapter, and I’m not usually one to say that because I don’t like to put pressure on authors. After all, they do have lives outside of their writing. Nevertheless though, I liked this fic so much I plan on checking out your other work. Regardless though, I don’t mean to write you a novel and I certainly don’t want to swell you ego too much. My best wishes for you and your writing.


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person Corvin
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you, I just want you to know that. THIS FIC IS AWESOME!!!!!!
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I officially dont know what else to say to express my awe! you are producing high quality chapters so fast my head is spinning... Thank God you have the time and the ability! Keep it up! I loved how you portrayed Gaara's anxiety and uncertainty. And the wall of sand it made me laugh... very well done, nyan! You aim to please and you really do it! Thank you! and update whenever you can...*trying to be humble and keep from begging pathetically.* Thank you for such a quick update... btw, please dont be mad at me for reviewing so much... I just love this story...
person Cindy
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're my heroine. I can't think of when I've read soemthing this good/hot. The pair is exquisite. Too yummy and fun for words and that includes the conversations as much as the actual lemons!!! THANKS!!