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for A Virgin Kiss

by Hestia

person Yersi Fanel
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice one, yeah! so hot
person Allys
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LIKE IT!!!
LOVE IT!!!
WANT MORE OF IT!!! :D
As usual - you rock my world. The first chapter was WAY too funny, I was laughing so hard people came to check on me (which just made me laugh harder). This is one of my absolute FAVOURITE pairings... YAY!!! And of course your updating skills... Legendary. Take a bow babe.
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, sometimes being the Hokage is a pain in the ass...hee-hee. Good chapter (though really short, darn you Hestia...such a tease). :)

I can't wait for Friday, I shall do a happy dance when it arrives.
person sharingan.swirl
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooh daaaammn!!!!!!! I love it!!!! More more more more more!!! Pweeze??

Serious, very erotic. maybe a little more detail to heighten the senses. But very nice. looking forward to the next chapter!

sharingan.swirl
person Nyuchan
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah.. This is nice! I like the whole feeling from the fic.. It's not smutty..it's erotic and sensual ^.^

Sweet. Please continue! :D
person Cindy
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*** OOOOO, BABY! ******

Rockin Good!
person Anna
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh... and here I was expecting some smutt in chapter three... ohhh well. *sits down to wait for the next chapter*
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you! I love you! I love You! Gods! you almost had me cumming! It is so arousing! Wonderfully well written! Nyan! Gimme...gimme... nyan!! ^.^
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hats off to you! I loved the glaring at Tsunade scene... united...nyan! Thank you for updating so fast, I will be waiting. It will be interesting to know what happens inside the sand nest. This chapter didnt feel empty. On the contrary, it was richly detailed and a needed rest before another one. I like the way Neji/Gaara is happening, its very natural and believable! Once again, GOOD JOB!!! and update whenever you want, I will be waiting, ok?
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is the hottest, most erotic conversation I've had the pleasure of reading in a long while! Please update... I dont like Gaara Neji particularily, but gods! this was great! I want to see what happens next! please?? *bribes with cookies*