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How interesting. I think I like this "battle of the wills" sort of plot. Whatever you do though, I hope you don't make Gaara completely submissive once they start actually fooling around. I don't see Gaara as the type to be submissive no matter what role he's in. Regardless though, I think you wrote this really well and I look forward to reading chapter two. My best wishes for you and your writing.



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Zomg. Dude, that was freakin awesome, I loved it!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! Oh please update soon! I shall suffer until you do!! AWESOME JOB! JUST FREAKIN AWESOME!!!

WoW~!

Ah DAMMIT Hestia! Why did you have to leave it there? Dammit, dammit, dammit. I'm glad to see that you are out of your writer's block, and with a mighty bang to boot. I love this story so far and simply ADORE how you write Gaara and Neji (but especially Gaara). I really hope that you plan on getting chapter 2 out sooner than later, because I might just have a conniption if I have to wait very long. There were numerous lines and ways that you phrased things that made me so jealous of your superbly crafted author skills...in fact, far to many to mention in this review. Keep this story up, it is wonderful and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Wow. I loved it! You're a very good writer. I never really thought about Gaara and Neji, but I might have to start considering it after this. I can't wait to see the next chapter. This one was hot and they didn't even do anything yet. I've never been this excited to read a kiss scene! I look forward to your next chapter, and the one after that...and so on.

WOW! that was fucking hot!

And to think that neither character are OOC. I really love your characterization of Neji and Gaara. Love the way their conversation went in the first chapter and how it ended in the second chapter.

I'll be looking forward for chapter 3.

P.S. This has to be the best plot and well-written NejiGaaraNeji fic I've read since I got addicted to the Naruto fandom.

*Applause* Yay, I just finish reviewing the first chapter, and then what do I see? The second. It made me happy. And the chapter, wow, hotness. It was very nummy. You're descriptions were amazing. And I like how both Neji and Gaara are portrayed in your fic. Once again, great job. And I hope you continue with the speedy updates.

THANK YOU!

By the way I'm late to work now and I haven't eaten supper because you updated...not that I'm complaining because this is a really great story. LOVE IT!!!