rate_review Reviews

ch 7
“Suck me off, and I’ll bend over and be your bitch.”
such motivational words. i think i was a man in a past life, because they seem to be inspiring me. Your skills of writing gay erotica are top notch. I feel all hot and bothered. I sometimes really do wish I was a guy…..ah neji and gaara are soooo fucking hot when they fuck. Sweet god In heaven. I think I want to marry you. J poor Gaara, he loves neji….gaara doesn’t even know how to deal with normal emotions. I wonder how he will fare with love.
-forgotten

ch 16
damn. just the thought of waking up in diffrent places in diffrent sexual acts randomly. go neji....his night was like a haze of pleasure.

I've read the D/s one you did and decided to follow the link to your other stories and found this one. I laughed and cried through it. I think a companion tale following Naruto's discovery of himself and the relationship development between him and Sasuke would be great!

OH MY GOD. This was amazing. I especially liked Neji's dealing with his feelings of inferiority and his denial and all that. It was amazing. Although sometimes I felt Gaara was a little out of character (mostly on the lemon scenes), the whole thing fitted together in the end and I'm not sure if I'm happy or sad to reach the ending. Hope to see some more of your work, this was amazing.

*cries* That is the best thing EVER! So sweet and smutty! I would love to have seen naruto and sasuke get together. But i guess that's what D/s is for huh? You are amazing. Keep up the highly addictive work ^_^

Despite only having seen one episode of Naruto (and disliking it) I really enjoyed this story. I appreciated how you added in details for people who weren't super familiar with the story and made it completely understandable :) I liked the way you did the epilogue :) that was sweet and I appreciated that you had moments of doubt after the random love at first fuck in the beginning. Thank you for a great story!

Just finished your fic and my lord!!! Can I die now now that I know where heaven is? Geez...you are such a superb storyteller! I think I love you. <333 This fic out of all of the rest is one of the sweetest, softest and most original couple I have ever read in a loooong time. Thank you so much for this and I hope you will never stop writing such beautiful fics. Ever. You are a true inspiration and I seriously want to ask permission to see if I can draw some fanart based on your wonderful characters. Thank you again! I can't wait to read more of your fuure posts. <333333

Oh no.....O__O!!! I wrote such a long message to you on my compliments and it got cut off....*sobs*

I won't be able to say this enough but I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! OMG!!! This was amazing. The ending was just... and the middle was like... and the smutt was... *huge nosebleed*. One of the best stories I've ever read. The "Love Man" made me cry in happiness, then the "Love Machine" made me cry in laughter. PHENOMINAL! EXTRAORDINARY! OMG!

*brain explosion*

Ougon

Ps. I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!

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