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for A Virgin Kiss

by Hestia

person Shosuro
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awe that was cute!
I was suddenly sadden that one of my favorite stories was coming to an end!!
I was also sadden that there was no Naruto/Sasuke action or even there was no resolution weather or not they even hooked up or anything......(sniff sniff) oh well this is not my story to tell, its yours! Thanks for this wonderful story about two characters I never thought would be good together, until this story!
Thanks again!
person Doomeh
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
....;____; Omfg it's over!? Awww T____T that was a cute ending but I'm so sad to see it over XD; :3 You've done a wonderful job on this, congratulations. *Throws confetti*
person Allys
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, that was fucking... *tears up and fans furiously* Oh my God, oooohhh! So SWEET!!! That was a perfect ending, that was so fucking awesome and I was Rolling, I actually Literally rolled laughing, when Gaara said "No you don't, I'm giving you a holiday" O.o XD. Oh and the little add in about how their love changed the face of the nation and the neighbouring nation, that was wonderful and Naruto and Sasuke got married, God I'm such a sucker. Jiraiya *clears throat* O.O *snicker snicker* LOL - Perverted bastard, LOL. The Icha Icha touches were a stroke of random genius, I especially loved the gift :D. Congrats Lady that is one long ass story, complete and Seikou!!! Excellent.
person RR
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great story!
After reading this, NejixGaara pair has become my favourite pair in Naruto anime.
I hope their relationship would last much longer than just one month
person Allys
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, LOL Okay that was Great. it started out with me being a little worried and telling the little voice in Neji's head "No don't say that!! Shut up!!" in my best distressed voice. Then Neji's insecurities started to crack me up, I always feel bad when I laugh at stuff like that, but it was fucking Hilarious when he started to be all jealous of... Naruto... LOL. Okay I'm an idiot. Anyway, loved that ending, can't wait for the next chapter. Neji's going to strut his stuff to take back his man, LOL, I love it XD.
person Allys
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaww! Hott dominating mirror sex and a way sweet ending. Way to go Lady. Not to mention the bit in beginning with Naruto. Love it, but you seem to be gearing up for a sad ending, sad but awfully realistic, I'm not even really sure what I'm rooting for.
person Syn
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love this story...NejiGaara is now my favorite pairing!! ^_^
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I read this yesterday but here is the promised review...
I am so happy... your story is wonderful!! the little things that make a couple, the remembered smiles, the touches, the perverted grins... you have it all down pat! I wonder what they are gonna do now... I worry for them... 'cause you can tell they love each other...
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dont worry about the toasts... you made them personal enough that we can guess who said what. you know? Naruto's reaction to the whole thing was so much fun!!! poor thing... he will take some time getting used to the changes in his friend. Friendship changes so much when a new boyfriend is introduced... nyah!! you feel jealous and sad... but happy at the same time... you know? I loved the naturality of the atmosphere between them both. It was beautiful... and I want to read more.. ne? *greedy cat grins like crazy* thank you!
person Allys
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG Lady... Lady, Lady, Lady, what are you trying to do to me?? Wow, I am sitting here so fucking happy right now =D, and all I can say is Thank you. Oh God, Ino and I could so hang out. The smex was some of your best and that party was the sweetest thing. The toasts were perfect, don't change a damn thing, warm and fuzzy feelings all around, that was Excellent.