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ROFLMAO!!! They did NOT!!! LOL! OMG That's so funny XD. They just grabbed each other and fucked in the middle of the road, huuhh, ;) *wipes a tear* That was great, and the all the feelings were awesome, to be that swept away, yeah don't we all wish. The sad thing about that is that I'm dead serious, to wish for something that consuming, C'est si bon.

Hee, I just read this update and I had to review... The non-descript lemon... Now, I've never liked non-descript lemons much. Mostly because I've had to write to many of them and they are so tough to write. Yeah, I can't really read lemons with little description and not remember my hellish experience writing them. But your 10 or so sentences were just so hot!!! I'm amazed at how well you fully conveyed everything so concisely. You didn't need to describe every moment and the effect it had... Just the way you were able to convey all those emotions and actions in so few words... Ah, it was perfect. Absolutely perfect. I think this is my favorite chapter so far. Neji's introspection and his love for Gaara just make me feel so giddy.

Oh, and thanks for this chapter. I'm feelin' pretty inspired thanks to you. I've got a NejiGaara fic I've been meaning to write and I feel so motivated to do it now^.^

I repeat... that was so cuuutttteeee XD!! That chapter was really a great way to express the feelings of when one is far from the loved one for a long time. I loved it... it was like a heartbeat... surging with love and happiness, anxiousness and hope. It was in fact my favorite! I adore it! Great way to show their relationship as something more than a meeting of bodies, but a meeting of hearts and spirits... really fitting... nyah!

Ohhh! Now I'm worried. I don't want them to fight, actually it may be rather amusing if they fight, but I don't want them to break up. I'm sitting here racking my brain for a compromise but I can't think of anything, which is why you're the author and not me. Other than that Neji bought Gaara a kitty - Kawaii!!! I'm kinda sad I missed the rimming, the butt plug and the skirt incidences, but I'm sure there'll be other fun stuff for me to go all fangirl over XD I'm very interested to see where this is going.

I was wondering who was going to cave first. The storm is rising, let's see where it goes.

Having second thoughts, eh Neji-kun? Bad, bad Neji! With an insecure lover as Gaara thats not a good thing... I wonder where you are headed... nyah... really... interesting... I love this hint of reality into their passionate world. more?

This is getting more interesting with every passing chapter... They really did a number on poor Gaara... and Neji has his work cut out for him if he wants to keep his lover... ne? Great job!!!

I thought you weren't going into the deep kinky stuff full throttle? :S Still good, but...
~The flame reviews~

Wow lady, you've made the sex all deep and psychological again, and of course it's still hot as all arse. The scene at the beginning where Neji is taking in the sights (Gaara's plugged and cum filled ass that is) and it makes him hard again, Hell if that wasn't memorable and knock my socks off material, nothing is. This also seems like you're leading up to something, some revelation or issue involving Gaara and their relationship, interesting, can't wait to see where (else) this goes.

LOL, as usual that was fantastic. I was a little worried about the arrow for a minute, I watched Shippuden Ep3 yesterday and I was like - someone's attacking Gaara!!! But it was all good :D, and then they actually got to fuck in the sand shell, LOL XD talk about fulfilling fantasies. I love that this is becoming circular. This chapter so played with my mind, cause in the middle of being all happy for the redhead I was like - Holy shit, why can you see the stars?!! *Sighs* That was emotional :), the good kind. Oh and about the little note at the end of the last chapter - I like B/D *pouts* you do it so well too :D. Although finding a clear Dom in this would be pretty hard, anyway thanks for the installment.