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for A Virgin Kiss

by Hestia

person Doomeh
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD First of all >> I adore this fanfiction, it's art to me. Hot, smutty art. Please update soon as XD There was kind of a gap for awhile for you and that made me a little sad. Second XD :3 Since I now know you actually look at NejixGaara artwork perhaps you'd like to see mine? XD It's on DA, the name is MalikxthexPsycho. Look for 'Christmas Bondage' in the search XD You cant miss it? And I also has more. Somewhere in there. *Cough* XD
person Allys
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was kinda angsty. How in hell do you make sex angsty :D?? I guess it just takes talent, ne?
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I have to say that as a middle child I can completely relate to Kankurou trying to be the piece maker. I couldn’t stop laughing during that entire sequence seeing as I always seem to be in the same situation; making sure no fights erupt that is. You did a great job with that scene and I just thought you should know. Are you sure you’re not a middle yourself?

Anyway though, I’m glad you’re back. The two new chapters you posted were HOT, and I was starting to wonder when Neji’s insecure side would surface, and Gaara’s dominate side would surface as well. Regardless though, I look forward to new chapters. My best wishes for you and your writing.
person Tati
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YaY! an update.

Thank you. *sniff* I missed Neji and Gaara. You have an awesome story here. I love it.
person Marstic666
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!! I love these storys! They are my fav 2 read! I really loved chapter 20 cuz of the sex toy! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOT!!!!!!!!!! Keep making them!
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally baaaaaaccccckkkkkK!!!!!!! I love you!!!!! *glomps* I love you I love you I love you I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was so waiting for an update from you!!! I'm really addicted to this story... I dont know what I will be doing... if you decide not to write anymore... nyah!!! please... there's lots of things to write about... just look around... not like me... I have a mental roadblock... I know what's supposed to be written but cant find the words to do so... nyah!! but this chapter really makes me happy... and hopeful!!!! Nyah!!!
person Allys
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol, you've done it again, that wonderful mix of sexy and funny, that's so very you. Good chappie, glad you're back to this :)
person dragonslayer1
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat!? Is it over? Please don't say it is! Must contiune must have good smut! There so little Neji Gaara stories!
person Ecks
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really have enjoyed your story so far. Keep up the good work!
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Clears throat* Is this on? yeah? Um... well... The cat has an announcement to make.
I LOVE NEJI AND GAARA!!!! HESTIA SAN IS TO BLAME!!!! I AM TURNING FANGIRL ON THEM! NYAAAA!!!!!!
Thank you for your attention.
(this last chapter... gods... how can I describe it? Kankuro's discussion with Neji clearly shows he cares... and I almost couldnt believe the ex virgin Neji getting it on with Gaara knowing the other one was gonna return any time... nyan... I understood his concern... but still... he has balls of steel... and blue balls too... let him cum...ne?)