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for A Virgin Kiss

by Hestia

schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm back! Sorry for not being up to date with this..nyan! Already a chapter 31? Jeez! Then they wonder why I dont update more often... I am too busy reading all those wonderful chapters to update... sou ka? I am reading again... lovely conversation before the fire... but I think I already told you my opinion on that..ne?
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now thanks to you I am in need of a hard, hot ***k. Thank you... Your descriptions are getting if anything better... and my ability to praise you and write coherently has in turn decreased... in short... you are to blame if my brain fries... but please continue.
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Maybe for you the Journey was 'fruitless' but to me it was deeply intimate and really enjoyable. Specially the last parts and Hyuuga's cheekyness...nyan (does that word even exist?) So, I enjoyed this chapter a heck of a lot... you didnt get me speechless and with a sudden urge to suck on a ... lollipop... ne? Arigatou!
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*A minute of silence in honor of the death of a fanfic reader...*
Nanda? Neko chan is dead?
Hai!
What happened?
She read one too many lemons... now her soul is lost to us...
Please return Nekochan!!
(now you wont have any more reviews... at least until I read the next chapter...ok?... one has to be firm in these things...)
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*comatose cat spread eagled on the afore mentioned table*
Mooto kudasai, Neji-kun! Faster! Please!! *opens eyes* Uh! Oh, you were there... um... tell me you didnt see that... right?
Anyway... that was one fucking hot scene... I love uke neji, fisted gaara and rough play all around... It was fitting... I liked the way Gaara reacted to being in his father's rooms. *nods with satisfaction* this lemon is great... you see this is what I love of your writings, those lemons have a reason... all of them... and I love my lemons to have a reason to exist... like sex does in everyday life... Jeez... you got me ranting again... Neji-kun, where was I? Oh yes... Gaara-san! Harder! push your babies inside this koneko's... (you better stop reading now... you dont want to know... Hentai!)
person Allys
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice. You totally had me cracking up over Kankuro and the table, and rather intrigued about this bath, hmmnn... you don't normally let your characters share, so... I don't know, I'll just have to be patient (it'll be good practice) cause that's not one of my strong points, until next time, Ja Ne.

p.s This is not exactly what I meant but thanks for the update Goddess Lady, that was wild. (I just reviewed Torture).
person Cindy
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One of the best EVER - you the bomb~!

thanks~!
person PurpleKitten
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh!!! This is brilliant!!! I love the reallity feeling this fic has, everything seems so well planned. I feel a little angry at Genma at the moment, but I love the guy, so I have to get over it =) Amazing lemons and characterising (don't know if that's a real word ^^;). Can't wait to read the next chap, update SOON!!

//Kitten
person Luthien Wildglen
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God, that was so...touching. I felt so bad for Gaara, having to live in a room that you know your father plotted to kill you in…that’s just terrible. But I’m glad that Neji was there to take care of Gaara. He was so tender and gentle with him, and…well…it was really nice. I especially liked this chapter and I just wanted you to know that. I also thought you should know that I think I love Neji even more than I previously did because of his selflessness about Gaara having children with a woman so he could have a “real” family, or whatever his exact motives were behind the comment. I really hope though that you go with the whole “Gaara has a demon inside him so he can bear children thing”; I think that would be wonderful. Anyway, that’s just my little input. My best wishes for you and your writing.


Dryad1789@hotmail.com
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay, I finally found the time to come and read the chapters I was behind on. The last chapter was kind of sad, I felt so bad for Gaara. I LOVED chapter 29...probably my favorite of the recent ones. I love ya, Hestia, you keep my brain entertained with GaaraNejiGaara goodness all day long. ;)