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November 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Don't delete this. I love this pairing. Shame there isn't more of this pair fics around. Anyways. Very good please keep up the good work.
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November 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
hi!
Ur story is great. I also like Orochimaru as an uke!
Btw, can u help me, since i'm new on this page, and i don't know a lot of things yet, like how to communicate with others.
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know, even though I'm only 70% sure of what's going on, I really liked this story. I'd love more of it, or more like it. Orochimaru makes a positively stunning uke if you ask me.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, don't be so hard on yourself! I love Orochimaru-sama as an uke! He's horrible as a seme... I don't think he'd be that abusive in sex anyway. He's so much cuter as an uke. This was great, I loved it.
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May 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg...tentacle rape...*creams pants* HELL YEAH! TAKE IT LIKE THE BITCH YOU ARE OROCHIMARU! XD I love writing Orochimaru as uke! I have yet to publish any of my JiraOro fics though. Anyway, I <3 U for your review on my OroIta fic "Names". And I know I cut the smut. I'd just had surgery like two days before I wrote it and (I blame this on the pain pills) I didnt have a single lemony bone in my body at the time. I feel I've made up for it with my OroKabu fic "Encounter" though. *nod nod*
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Y'know... I REALLY didn't wanna read this at first... I found it while at a friend's house and completely freaked at the thought of an uke!Orochimaru. My friend (as messed as she is) read it and took great joy in pointing out the things she'd knew I'd find squeamish... Orochimaru whimpering... the tenticles...
Yet... when I'm supposed to be writing a 12 page essay for history class and I was distracting myself with sweet sweet yaoi, I found your story again... and I succumbed to the temptation.
And HOT DAMN am I glad I did!!
You are AWESOME!! It's just... like... whoa-freaking-gawd-great!! I'm glad I read it in the end, I really am. My friend will never let me live it down... but I think I'll manage.
Keep writing great stuff! *thumbs up*
You're wicked and in the good way!
Yet... when I'm supposed to be writing a 12 page essay for history class and I was distracting myself with sweet sweet yaoi, I found your story again... and I succumbed to the temptation.
And HOT DAMN am I glad I did!!
You are AWESOME!! It's just... like... whoa-freaking-gawd-great!! I'm glad I read it in the end, I really am. My friend will never let me live it down... but I think I'll manage.
Keep writing great stuff! *thumbs up*
You're wicked and in the good way!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh. You know just how to please a girl! This story had all of my favorite things and I adore you for it. May the porn gods rain free doujinshi upon your treasured soul.
I love Orochimaru as seme or uke. Stories with him in it are hot regardless of which position he takes. Loved the bondage and voyeurism too. ESPECIALLY loved the tentacles (my absolute favorite thing). I read a lot of fanfiction, but this is the first tentacle 'rape' fic with Orochimaru I have ever seem. Kudos to you for writing it! I only wish it had more chapters.
This gives me horribly devious plot bunnies which I must set free X3 I will definitely be looking up your other stories.
I love Orochimaru as seme or uke. Stories with him in it are hot regardless of which position he takes. Loved the bondage and voyeurism too. ESPECIALLY loved the tentacles (my absolute favorite thing). I read a lot of fanfiction, but this is the first tentacle 'rape' fic with Orochimaru I have ever seem. Kudos to you for writing it! I only wish it had more chapters.
This gives me horribly devious plot bunnies which I must set free X3 I will definitely be looking up your other stories.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love Jira/Oro and Oro/Jira fics! I hope to write one myself one day. I loved it.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*blinks*
what? that's it?
o o
*stares at you*
but that was.. so.. sexy ... *whines patheticly*
now *that* is cruel. *pouts*
hehe... told you i was fucked up. *giggles, eyes glittering* ^ ^
what? that's it?
o o
*stares at you*
but that was.. so.. sexy ... *whines patheticly*
now *that* is cruel. *pouts*
hehe... told you i was fucked up. *giggles, eyes glittering* ^ ^
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was an interesting story, but what was the purpose behind raping Orochimaru and having Kabuto witness it. I just couldn't grasp the situation at hand.