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for Snake Taming

by Manasa

person Anonymous
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story, really. I thought you captured them perfectly. *nods* But..what i don't understand is: Did Kabuto betray him? I just...kina got confused on Kabuto's role was all. ^^;; But other than that, perfect. And your right, Orochi ukes can be alot more fun. *grins*
person Valenti
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic due to the fact that Orochimaru is UKE! I mean, I adore him as uke, cause guys like those need to get LAID. haha. I like how you used tentacles, because you never see enough out there. Hey, I'm so inspired by your work of art, that I just might write an Oro/Jirai just for YOU! so...I guess you know how much I like your fic. ^^;
person Hasu
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
?! *falls over in shock anime style* Wow....That was.....different.
Wow. Really good work........Hmm, Orochi *toothy grin* tied down.
Excuse me. *tackle glomp*