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by Valenti

person Leeana69
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke. That boy has an iron will, I'm impressed that he hasn't just tied Naruto up and molested him into submission.

*gets a nosebleed from pervy thoughts*

Ah the story ideas. Being a perv is fun, no wonder Kakashi keeps his book with him at all times. XDDD
person Amy-chan
schedule January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was laughing my ass off all the way through this, great job! Poor sex deprived Sasuke, but Naruto's loving it XD PLEASE update soon!
person Bombay
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!

*awkward scream/screeching sounds*

i love this story sooooooooooooooo much please continue and soon!
person Stardustinfinity
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hay, this is a cute fic. . . .better than the things I came yup with this year. . . >_<,
person Emma125
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
COOL! I kinda feel soory for Sasuke-teme, Well only a little ^-^ I wonder what Naru-chan has planned.
I hope you up-date soon.
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I LOVED it! These first 2 chapters were hilarious, well written, and hot as hell. Especially the almost-bunshin-smex, very nice! The summary had me laughing out loud, and the story itself has yet to disappoint. Horny!Sasuke is really funny, and I absolutely cannot wait for the beach chapter, assuming it will be a chapter. Hopefully it is, since the Naruto and Sasuke you write is some of the funniest stuff around. I personally can't write comedy at all, and when someone does it as flawlessly as you have I can't help but admire the author. I also can't wait to read the following chapters! Great work, hope to see more from you soon ^_^
person Dani
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is cute. ^.^ I can't wait for the next update. Yum.
person innerchild
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cute chapter. i hope you update soon!

-inc
person innerchild
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cute idea. i wanna see who will cave in first. so please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!1

-inc
person Yay good stuff!
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! keep going! hehehe now really....with holding only makes the problem bigger lol that's why you gotta keeping going i wanna see whos' gonna go 'boom' first!