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for Slipper Orchid

by Saro

schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how REALISTIC this is for fantasy sex. The laughter and discomfort and confusion. I love the "doing this for the first time nervous" reference. Awesome. Really great great great writing. I love the way you characterize Ino.

person mouserr
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im gonna hafta agree with the rest of the reviews, this was hot ... nuclear hot at times and it practically begs for a follow up
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ino is a sly sly woman. And I totally agree with Naruto. Ehm... on practically anything he said. *grin*
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was soo funny! I was laughing my head off in the beginning, I almost stopped breathing!
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...That was seriously the most awesome Ino/Naruto/Sakura story ever. ::Drools::

PLEASE make another chapter...this just begs for more action.

~KF~
person Askerian
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
prrprrprr. Did I tell you hat this is damn hot enough times? Also I fucking love Naruto's voice in there, and it's all so deliciously naughty. Prrrr. :loves on you:
person Anon
schedule January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
0.0 awesome
person wow
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, this is fricken sweet. Props to you man.
person Anon
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sweetness.
person Tsukashi
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAYUMM!!! That was freaking hawt.