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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my! this is so intriguing! i mean, does sasuke have to befriend naruto and then kill him to become strong enough to kill his brother, like canon? or is it like an intervention thing, and someone's trying to open sasuke's eyes before it's too late to change his life? man, i'm really into this one! way to go!
update soon!
update soon!
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Continue
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this so far. is charlie orochimaru? he just... creeps me out, and orochimaru really creeps me out, so it kind of makes sense. or at least in my head it does. anyway, i like how sasuke has to befriend naruto... and yet he's never had a friend before and he basically scared him when they first met. but that's sasuke for ya.... little anti social, but still loveable once u get past the death glare.
anywho, i hope you update soon.
-inc
anywho, i hope you update soon.
-inc
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Im completly in love with this kind of storyline! Its one of my favorites! Hehe of course, every single one of your fics has an AMAZING plot. Hehe, thats why you are one of my favorite fanfiction author's <3. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep up with this fic. Its SOOO hard to find one like this. I LOVE YOU! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I cant believe the # of reviews that you have though (on this fic). I would think that you would of had WAY more...Anyways, im sure by tomorrow the number will double :D . Alright, enought rambling. This chapter was GREAT. Glorious smooth writing and all that jazz. Keep it up! PLEASE UPDATE *cough*therestofyourficstoo*cough*
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Im completly in love with this kind of storyline! Its one of my favorites! Hehe of course, every single one of your fics has an AMAZING plot. Hehe, thats why you are one of my favorite fanfiction author's <3. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep up with this fic. Its SOOO hard to find one like this. I LOVE YOU! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I cant believe the # of reviews that you have though (on this fic). I would think that you would of had WAY more...Anyways, im sure by tomorrow the number will double :D . Alright, enought rambling. This chapter was GREAT. Glorious smooth writing and all that jazz. Keep it up! PLEASE UPDATE *cough*therestofyourficstoo*cough*
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-_- AF.net does not seem to want to post my full review. However, just believe me when I say that this fic fic is AMAZING and i REALLY would love to see more!
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE THIS! ITS SSSOOO HARD TO FIND THIS KIND OF STORYLINE. Please keep it going! *Is desperate* XD
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This seems interesting. Keep writing. ^.^
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November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's really good so far :). It's gonna be a real challenge for Sasuke to befriend Naruto. Yeah since he's the complete opposite of Sasuke, but that's why I like SasuNaru so much. They compliment each other so damn well, like the Moon(Sasuke) and the Sun(Naruto) is what I like to think of them as being, opposite, but so beautiful together at the same time ^-^. Yeah I'm just a hopeless romantic ^_~, great story though, please update as soon as you can , pretty please with sugar on top :D!