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OMFG! Will you marry me???????????

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Well, I'd never even thought of this threesome!! You're doing a great job, and congrats on your first AFF.net story!

GaaraSasuNeji, wow, what more can you ask for? Have you finished all four parts already? Awesome! I haven't written one. Threesome must be difficult to write.

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*ran out of room again* please write more. Your story is awesome. Only thing don't make Sasuke seme in anyway (sasUKE), or Gaara uke in any way for the lemon. Hope my review inspied you to write. By the way.... YOU ROCK MY FUCKING RAINBOW COLORED SOCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sounds pretty cool! You should totally continue writing this! :D hope to see you your update soon.... I WANT TO SEE SAUSKE REASURED!!


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poor Sasuke. All ukes need reassurances from their semes. hahaha. nice work. more would be nice!!!

*Droool* You really ought to update this. It's to good to be left as it is. But maybe next time there could be a little Lemon.. Maybe? *Angelic smile*

However thanks for giving me a good wake up story! NejiSasuGaa is the smeX! xD xD
Ja Ne~