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for Concession

by oraday

person Ikippiki
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! HOT! Your writting style never stops to amaze me. Your stories all seem to be somehow written differently but with your skillful hand recognizable. Please continue to write such good fanfics!! I'm looking forward to reading them.
person Drear
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Neji's thoughts, right...?
Loved it. Selfish Gaara is the best. Brilliant. =]
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well written. I loved it.
person ShayBoo
schedule January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!

At first I assumed that they were Neji's thoughts... I had to read it three times before i couldn't figure out who's thoughts they were.
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice one... really nice. I think the thought belong to Neji... it seemed that even though Gaara was uke, he was controlling the pace of what was happening between them - also in the last couple of lines when you wrote that Gaara always always came first in their relationship - came! hah, was that a pun by the way? I just thought about it loool, if it is it's a really good pun lol. So yeah lool, I'll shut up now

Really liked it ^_^
Hina xXxx
person Panda-chan
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it...a whole lot. For some odd reason, I know Neji is seme and all...but I really think those thoughts were Neji's. You should write more stories like this! ^^
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Neji's thoughts... I hope...
can we see what the other side of the equation thinks??? please *blinks*
person Yersi Fanel
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Neji's, yeah, sounds right to me (and if I'm not, who cares? lol)
nice shot.
person Anon
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
neji thought
person Sama
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg first off that was an excellent gaara and neiji story and second you need, must make another!!! Finally? LOL I think it was neiji thoughts, though I could be wrong and it end up being gaara. LOVED IT! Please continued with your excellent work! Hope to see another update on gayday! WEEE! BYES!