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for All in his head

by darkisle

person wendyghost
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its really good!
person lilithwolf
schedule December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I rate this a 9 out of 10 on my funny/i-love-it-so-much-o-meter. i've never gotten so many funny mental images from a fanfic before and this si simply too cute!
lilithwolf@excite.com
person Steph
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep going. I really like the story!
person ANF
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kyaa, so cute, please continue and update soon!
person DDL
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that chapter was great! absolutely adorable and i cant wait to read more!
person Just a Rambling Romantic
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.... <3 Absolute love for your story!! :D
person **Hinata**
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um... seems like this could develope into a good plot... but... wel it also seems to being going along with the anime so i'm just wondering, are they 12???!!! I hope not, cuz other than that I think it good
person Mija
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol I am soo loving this, I bet Naruto is going nuts having Sasu in his head, and omg he doesnt know what the F word means? literally? omg too funny, and floating hearts with Sasu Naru in it, lol can just see Kyuubi dodging all those hearts in his cage and growling at them, snapping at them trying to eat them lol, really loved this and hope to read more soon, ty for the read, huggles and smiles mija...:-)
person terranigma11
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's nice that you finally got around to doing this. I must say i've been waiting for it. Yeah your right, i'm seriously overstressing myself and would have been so sad if this puppy never saw the light of day. It's a very good start and very entertaining, just as i'd imagined it! Do keep going, you surely have done it better than i would have!
person blisblop
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Too cute."That wasn't me"! .Very funny. Butts "squeeze", sounds like he is holding something in, you might wanna say flex next time.Wink.