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for All in his head

by darkisle

person Briryan
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was funny! Poor Naruto. Really looking forward to what happenes when he finally tells Sasuke about being able to hear his thoughts. Can't wait till the next chapter.
person Mik
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Hooray for random floating hearts of doom!!!!
person seraphym
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
funny! I can't wait for some NaruSasu action though!
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for blowing off your term papers and final studying to write this. I love you for it. Yes, this chapter was most definitely good. I love how you actually incorporate it directly into the storyline that actually exists. Kudos to you for being able to do that (I never can). Once again, I just want to say how much I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. :)
person darktoy
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK it killed me! It totally killed me! And after all that trouble, the one who's really suffering is Kyuubi!

The poor fur ball, must deal with a totally naive and kinda stupid kid, and now a totally crazed head-over-heals Uchiha! Poor Kyuu! *cuddles*

Anyway, I love the way this is going through!
UPDATE SOON!

(And kill those teachers if they bother so much!... or at leats do it on a fic!)
person lo
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is fun, I like what you are doing here. Keep up the good work.
person powder07blossom
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! It's kinda funny how Sasuke remains stoic on the outside but thinks a lot on the inside...How oulde he even pull that off? Anyway, update soon ne?

PS: There's a mistake on the first chapter of the story...If the short paw was pointing at 12, and the long paw was poiniting at 1, then the time should have been five minutes past midnight (12:05am)... :D
person innerchild
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, what the hell was up with those heart? i still can't stop laughing at them. poor kyuubi. oh well, that was awesome. i really do love this story. i hope you update soon.

-inc
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! KEEP GOING!!
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! KEEP GOING!!