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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool start. Can't wait till the next chapter.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Anyways~ I really like the story! I'm sick right now and just saying whats going between him and the fox made me feel a bit better ^.^ Hope you update soon (and I hope I'm near the computer when you do XD) Anyways please update when you can.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this is getting good. I look forward to seeing the rest of it! I love the structure. And Kyuubi is delightfully annoying to Naruto, so this looks like it's going to be really quite funny.
Keep up the good work,
a/j
Keep up the good work,
a/j
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good start. I can't wait to see what haappens next. Very original. Please update soon.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to read more! Nyan! Me likes a lot! intriguing... and you say its during their c rank mission! Cool... lets see what you have in mind, nyan!
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor Naruto! Did Sakura cast the jutsu? Good intro.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon...like now?...please?
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome idea! I like what you have so far, so please continue?
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this premise alot! And it wasn't very boring at all. It is after all the first chapter. Poor Naruto, lol, having to hear the teme's thoughts. I wonder if Sasuke will catch on...Update soon!
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
its a really great chapter, i hope you update it really soon