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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gosh what the hell is wrong with fanfiction.net?! I didnt expect to find this fic here but i'm glad i did! Really good for a first cant wait for more.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You WILL update this. NOW.
...please...?
...please...?
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You WILL update this. NOW.
...please...?
...please...?
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I really like this story you got here :D! Oh please you must update as soon as you can XD! I'm dying to know what Sasuke thinks of Naruto next, pretty please with sugar on top ^-^!!!
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT-LOVE IT-LOVE IT-LOVE IT-LOVE IT-LOVE IT!!! I'm sorry I can't compliment in detail, I'm just so tired right now an my eyes have gone all bleary for sitting at the somputer for so long but there was this story with 37 chapters and they were quite long but it was very interesting so I had to finish reading it all and then after there was this site that I visited and then I had to scroll through all these pages of...wait...why am I bothering you with incessant ramblings.
Anywayz, just know that I love this story. Though, I wish you'd have set the story in a time later than when they were escorting Tazuna to the wave country. It'd have made more sense as it'd have given Sasuke more time to come to terms with his feelings for Naruto.
And Sakura...yare-yare...I think it's safe to say, that she had something to do with this. Though, why? I can't fathom. Was it because she thought that if she did it, Naruto would hear thoughts of Sasuke insulting him and leave him be? Or maybe...it's not Sakura at all...KAKASHI!! But then who else...?
Ah well, update soon please!!
Anywayz, just know that I love this story. Though, I wish you'd have set the story in a time later than when they were escorting Tazuna to the wave country. It'd have made more sense as it'd have given Sasuke more time to come to terms with his feelings for Naruto.
And Sakura...yare-yare...I think it's safe to say, that she had something to do with this. Though, why? I can't fathom. Was it because she thought that if she did it, Naruto would hear thoughts of Sasuke insulting him and leave him be? Or maybe...it's not Sakura at all...KAKASHI!! But then who else...?
Ah well, update soon please!!
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How interesting! A sort of alternate-timeline dealie that goes way back to the near-beginning. I like it. Personally, I can grok ATs much better than AUs... maybe I'm nutty.
You have a very simple, straightforward, subtly witty way of expressing yourself, and I like it lots and lots and parking-lots. You pulled this off with nary an readerly-noticable hitch. ^^
I'll be watching to see where you take us next. Good luck!
- DeeDubbya
You have a very simple, straightforward, subtly witty way of expressing yourself, and I like it lots and lots and parking-lots. You pulled this off with nary an readerly-noticable hitch. ^^
I'll be watching to see where you take us next. Good luck!
- DeeDubbya
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh jumping Jehoshaphat that was brilliant! I love the plot its so original! Sasuke's thoughts crack me up i cant wait to see how this progresses. Much love and update soon!
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This story is wonderful! Its quirky and unique! Great beggining please write more!
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sooooooooooo wanna post that next chappie
plzzzzzzzzzzz i'll like love ya forever???
plzzzzzzzzzzz i'll like love ya forever???
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool first chapter, I think it has a lot of promise. You have me interested. I hope to see another chapter soon. Good jod.