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I like it!!!!! But I think you need something infront of Sasuke's thoughts like this ~thought~ to signify it, it made it a little hard to read, but by other wise fantastic job!!! ;p

THAT BITCH! That GENIUS BITCH! now she will lose Sasuke 4ever MWAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Stupid girl. But those nightmars sound highly scary. Awesome plot, very amusing. VERY NICE OVERALL!!! good job *thumbs up* =D

i really like where this is going

are you planing to follow the cannon timeline the intire time? or is it just a way to get started?

either way i hope you continue this its a really neat spin on a overused idea.

hahahahahhahaha this was awsem pleas pleas update soon!!! *pappy eyes*

Oh I think this story has promise. I love seeing new plotlines like this. Can't wait for an update.

so sakura did it right? because she's acting so smug about it all? But I would love if sasuke and naruto got it on a little (or maybe a lot)! Cool idea though! looking forward to reading more!

This is really, really good. I will jump inside my computer and hunt you down if you choose not to continue this little gem of a fic. Really, I liked it and you are a very capable writer indeed! I throw you bags and bags of imaginary money to help you get to crackin' on the next chapter.

Please write more.

Sounds good. Continue

O god it was her.....wasn't it.....WASN'T IT!!!!! Huh. O & I love that sasuke is so obsessed with naruto. Lol. I also like the fact that naruto doesn't seem to care. He just want him out of his mine. Lol. But you know what will really be funny.......If sasuke gets tuned on by naruto.....Like for example when naruto is bathing......or when he gets hot and takes his jaket....or even better shert off. Lol Hay maybe you cane even have kakashi come on to naruto as well. Well I mean not out of love but you know how kakashi's a pervert, well like that. Or if you want have kakashi just be sweet, and protective of naruto. And naruto just wants to be away from the creapy, and perverted sasuke. So naruto satrts being very clingy to kakashi. And sasuke gets pisses. And jelious. Lol Know what I mean. ^_~ Anyway it was just a thought.
Well Update soon please. I can't wait. Latter
Kisses ^_~