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for Never Ending Cycle

by XLithiumX

person Vague
schedule February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is very intriguing. I do hope you pick it back up again and continue it. :)
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really good, you need to update! I feel so bad for Naruto
person Emma125
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL! what's gonna happen to Naru-chan?
person Nita
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im really likin this story and cant wait for more...poor naruto...anywayz i hope there is more soon..have fun writin
-Nita
person Stalker-san
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think i fell in love... 0-0

Very nice first chapter and all the way to the fifth, but the spacing of the paragraphs took a while to get used to. You also forgot a couple of letters in a few words over the five chapters, but it still is a great fic.

Nice story line, detail and expression. 5/5
person minjin
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOAH!! What can i say this is just amazing. I love this story!! I love the way you portay Naruto and the feelings that he has for Sasuke hehe ^^

You have really amazing skills!!
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a sweet story
person darktoy
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Intersting, very very interesting.... Sasuke it's starting to put the moves on naru-chan... hmmmmmmm Kakashi would like to give some counseling to poor Sasuke if he heard that... (maybe he would do some teaching with the Icha Icha books?)

UPDATE SOON!
person TheDeviant (too lazy to login)
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start!! Im sooooo excited for this fic... yay sasunaru and itanaru, my two faveorite pairings!! (even though itachi is a wee bit tipsy)

Anyway, please update soon! I am in love!