rate_review Reviews

Can't wait. I love this story. Nothin' like a good lemon filled SasuNaru story to up your spirts!XD

AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is SSSOOO HOT!!!!!!! It's really hard to find a story where they fall in love and stay there!! Usually they won't admit that there are in love at first then one of them thinks the other is cheating so they break up and then stay apart FOREVER. Until they realize that they are made for each other. Your story puts them togther and keeps them there!!!!!! YANESS!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!!!

''When he was done, they pulled back, a string of saliva trailing from each others mouths. Sasuke reached for the ribbon and tied it around his lovers eyes. Naruto made a 'huh?' noise and started panicking, not knowing what was gonna happen. Sasuke saw this and kissed his cheek calming and soothingly.

"Shh, its okay..its just something different for a change..trust me."

[...]

He looked down to see Naruto staring up at him with lustful eyes.''

This part doesn't work... you might want to correct it
Your story is great though!
Your slashes are really hot and well written and I like the way you're leading your characters! I enjoy reading your fic a lot!!

Uhh what happened to the ribbon?

Yes, Please may we have some more?
This is a great start & I would love to read some more...
(I like the TemeSusuke)

hey i love ur story, IT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!! i'm sorry your having trouble with ur computer i hope u get over ur writers block soon. thanks for giving us a notice though because some people just leave it and we wonder if they died or something. love the story please update soon and i hope ur computer is better now or soon. ;I :)

-snickers- isn't it just fun to make naruto out to have such a feminine yet oh so deliciously fuckable body that just drives the guys wild? see that's y they aleays fight over him and it's so much fun to read specially when it ends up with sasuke on top and how he freakin likes to rub that lil tid bit in too! -laughing- now it would be even more funnier when naruto ends up preggy cause of kyuubi. oh the horrors of pregnacy. -laughs harder- love the story and can't wait for more to come!

I love this story! Are you going to have Sai do something mean and nasty to Naruto? Then have Sasuke,when he finds out, kick Sais butt!!Cause that would be so awesome!!

lemon pls!

So cute!!!!! But i think for once you should make Sasuke bottom! No wonder Naruto kept sending him out, had to get things prepaired.HAWT! LEMON!!!