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for Can you keep a secret?

by SasuNarulover

person Mimiz
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your chapters are alittle to short but other than that this is a great story please do up date soon, you really have a great story coming along! KEEP GOING!!!!
person lily-of-the-nile
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh please tell me there's gonna be a lemon in the next chapter *puppy dog eyes*!!!!! I think this story so far is becoming my fav story so far!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person eien no ren
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that's it? you tease! Please write more!!!
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh, glad you like it. I'm writing the first chapter as we speak! :]
person Izzy
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
of course you have to continue!! so far i adore this...plus i love sasu-chan as a oc, i find him more.....u fill in the blank
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heehee Chappie two is up! hope you like it ch 3 MIGHT be a lemon. who knows? >D