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for Hidden Powers

by GoldenSensei

person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ Gaara and Naruto make the perfect couple. I like the story and Gaara just seems so kawaii in this story. I also think Naruto and Sasuke would be more brothers than lovers..... But anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.
person Mey
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, awsome fic!!!
Lurv the waty you make Gaara look so cute! Though it's quite a personality change...
I don't want to be rude or anything like that, but to me he sort of got over all his troubles too quickly...
schedule December 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awww...that's so cute. I'm a big fan of Gaara getting all broken and Naruto saving him. Hooray for that. You might want to slow your plot down just a little. The Gaara/Naruto stuff is really good, but the Sakura/Temari/Shika stuff is rushing by pretty quickly. I was a little confused.

Still, good story, and please update soon.
person lilithwolf
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
too sweet and beautiful. you must continue! please!!!
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person Nar/Gaa lover
schedule November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww, finally, Naruto comes to rescue. I really want to see how this develops, Naruto and Gaara are just so sweet together.

That and I'm liking the whole spin on Shikamaru's persona. Perverted genius....

And what about Kankuro? You just can't leave him out of this story!
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I missed your update...silly me. If I wouldn't have followed your link in my review section I would have never known and that would have been soooooo sad. Anywhoosits...I'm glad that you continued. Can't wait for more of the Naruto and Gaara fun. Especially since it sounds like your are setting Gaara up to be next to or in the same room as Naruto. Fun stuff can happen in the middle of the night.

welp, update soon, and perhaps email me when you do so that I can actually know about it and not miss it like I was going to.
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fucking brilliant if I don't say so myself. And I loved the metaphorical walls.

And I'm almost afraid to guess, but your either a girl or a gay guy.

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Please say your a gay guy!
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ nice....... Naruto..... couldn't wait to see Naruto!?! In one of your sentances it says "Naruto was bouncing off metaphorical walls He couldn’t wait to see Naruto again."...... Naruto wiggled his butt..... Naruto: Perv.... Me: I can't help it if I have dreams that I wish will come true..... You think I'm a perv just thinkin that just imagine what would happen to you. You in the same room with Kyuubi in human form and Gaara with them holding ropes and all kindas of stuff. Naruto: ...... O.O;! Me: Oh, and I beleive that your a girl, please tell me if I'm right. And sorry, me and Naruto somtimes fight and this is what happens ^^;
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^^ nice....... Naruto..... couldn't wait to see Naruto!?! In one of your sentances it says "Naruto was bouncing off metaphorical walls He couldn’t wait to see Naruto again."...... Naruto wiggled his butt..... Naruto: Perv.... Me: I can't help it if I have dreams that I wish will come true..... You think I'm a perv just thinkin that just imagine what would happen to you. You in the same room with Kyuubi in human form and Gaara with them holding ropes and all kindas of stuff. Naruto: ...... O.O;! Me: Oh, and I beleive that your a girl, please tell me if I'm right. And sorry, me and Naruto somtimes fight and this is what happens ^^; I forgot to put my name in the one above so sorry
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor Gaara. I like it you must hurry so I can see what happens. And Naruto! Hurry and rescue Gaara, he needs you!