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Wow, this is really great so far and I hope you continue, it would be a shame if this went unfinished.

I love it so far, I really do hope that you continue writing this story. Great job!

Good opening chapter, the relationships you've set up for the different characters look like they'll make for an interesting series. This chapter didn't interest me too much, but that's just for personal reasons, in that I don't care too much for Ino.

My only gripe is with some grammatical issues. There were a number of times when I couldn't tell who was speaking, and had to read ahead and behind the text for a little while to try and puzzle it out. Having spoken text on its own line without any description of who's talking and how they're saying it was troublesome in a few places.

Overall I'm looking forward to followup chapters of this series :)

Yes, this story is definitly worth writing, it already has soo many paths to go on, its rather quite impressive. I highly encourage you to please continue the story.
Episode 192...funny as hell/l33t/

Of course it's worth writing! Looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow! Love the story! I love the plot and the character bonding between Naruto and Ino. Don't get me wrong, my taste in pairings runs along the lines of NaruxSaku, SasuxSaku, or all three together, but that scene with Naruto and Ino just talking was really great. I REALLY hope that you continue writing this story and I'll definitely be waiting for the next chapter! =^,^=

I think that this is a good start. Hopefully it will go into more detail about each relationship as you progress. I liked the first chapter and I look forward to more. As for Ino/Naruto missions, the one you mentioned was one of the filler episodes. I'm not sure if it was in the Manga though. I saw it though and it was pretty funny. :)

Yesh! Such a romance/angst-ish fic is definitely worth continuing! Keep working on it!!!!! ^-^ Thumbs up!!!

Hey, this was good. I seriously look forward to the next chapters! So update as sooon as possible.

I really like your story, you should continue it and update as soon as possible!!!!!!!!