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May 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey just wondering what happened to the other ten chapters? I came to check and see if you updated this story only to find out that only the prolouge is up. Just a little confused on what happened to the other chapters.
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September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this story...its progressing nicely but i would have liked to read something about the missing years for naruto...I hope you update soon.
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March 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE!!!!!
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January 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot of the story.. you stopped at the most interesting point! Please, continue. I find the situation with forgotten promise so real. It's quite natural to forget our old childhood friends and not to need or care about them anymore, it happens all the time, so - 'What's your damage, Naruto?' - Sasuke will ask him simply.
Why does Naruto want this so much? Only out of stubborness or a habit to always keeping his word? He owes Sasuke nothing if the guy doesn't need him anymore, so why not to let go? Even if Sasuke's unhappy and lonely - he is - does it give Naruto the right to break into his life?
Now to impressions:
honestly, there's too many well-meaning, loving and over-protective people around Naruto.. how did he survive??? I'd understand if he and preferred some harsh, outspoken, tough guy's company to his own nearest & dearest.. Sasuke's just the man to be a healthy change in his life :))
I began to hate Tsunade:) A very unbalanced, nerve-racking, hysterical person who can drive anyone nuts. Her own personal tragedies and losses don't give her a good enough excuse to 'own' and rule anyone.. what would have happened to her dead son were he in Naruto's place?? She'd suffocated and crushed him with her love. There's too much of her in Naruto's life; sooner or later she'll have to be stopped, firmly, from interfering. She's in for a very painful lesson when Naruto wil be claimed by someone as possessive and jealous as she is (guess who :))
Naruto must have a VERY strong personality to stay a normal guy among all these mother hens. The time's for a hawk to appear..
It's strange that Iruka didn't pay any attention to the fact that his son fainted. Why??
You keep misspelling Kisame's surname throughout the chapter and mixed him up with Kakashi once.
It's strange that Sasuke didn't know about Naruto moving in his room - Kisame promised to inform him of the 'punishment' terms, right?
Iruka thinks that Sasuke had means to find Naruto - the Uchihas are rich after all. But the same is true for Naruto himself - he could have found out the address of Uchihas' residence and home phone, and send a letter, call Sasuke. It's very easy and costs nothing. Does he know how to use the Internet? :)) So I think he himself wasn't _THAT_ interested in finding his friend. And I doubt that Tsunade would have informed 'her' Naruto that Sasuke was looking for him..
I'm interested in the reason why Naruto was 'erased' from his memory.. could it be some kind of psychol. protection after the trauma of separation with him? Or did he give up on everything precious to him after living with Itachi? I mean, better forget & not to be attached to anyone any more to avoid disappointment?..
Yes, it's very like Naruto to selfishly persist on coming into someone's life again, to push and break into, the other person's feeling be damned.. well, he's in for a big fight. Yes, he CAN be forgotten, ignored and dismissed as a complete stranger. Why not?
Why does Naruto want this so much? Only out of stubborness or a habit to always keeping his word? He owes Sasuke nothing if the guy doesn't need him anymore, so why not to let go? Even if Sasuke's unhappy and lonely - he is - does it give Naruto the right to break into his life?
Now to impressions:
honestly, there's too many well-meaning, loving and over-protective people around Naruto.. how did he survive??? I'd understand if he and preferred some harsh, outspoken, tough guy's company to his own nearest & dearest.. Sasuke's just the man to be a healthy change in his life :))
I began to hate Tsunade:) A very unbalanced, nerve-racking, hysterical person who can drive anyone nuts. Her own personal tragedies and losses don't give her a good enough excuse to 'own' and rule anyone.. what would have happened to her dead son were he in Naruto's place?? She'd suffocated and crushed him with her love. There's too much of her in Naruto's life; sooner or later she'll have to be stopped, firmly, from interfering. She's in for a very painful lesson when Naruto wil be claimed by someone as possessive and jealous as she is (guess who :))
Naruto must have a VERY strong personality to stay a normal guy among all these mother hens. The time's for a hawk to appear..
It's strange that Iruka didn't pay any attention to the fact that his son fainted. Why??
You keep misspelling Kisame's surname throughout the chapter and mixed him up with Kakashi once.
It's strange that Sasuke didn't know about Naruto moving in his room - Kisame promised to inform him of the 'punishment' terms, right?
Iruka thinks that Sasuke had means to find Naruto - the Uchihas are rich after all. But the same is true for Naruto himself - he could have found out the address of Uchihas' residence and home phone, and send a letter, call Sasuke. It's very easy and costs nothing. Does he know how to use the Internet? :)) So I think he himself wasn't _THAT_ interested in finding his friend. And I doubt that Tsunade would have informed 'her' Naruto that Sasuke was looking for him..
I'm interested in the reason why Naruto was 'erased' from his memory.. could it be some kind of psychol. protection after the trauma of separation with him? Or did he give up on everything precious to him after living with Itachi? I mean, better forget & not to be attached to anyone any more to avoid disappointment?..
Yes, it's very like Naruto to selfishly persist on coming into someone's life again, to push and break into, the other person's feeling be damned.. well, he's in for a big fight. Yes, he CAN be forgotten, ignored and dismissed as a complete stranger. Why not?
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July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG. You have no idea how ironic it is that you updated this story. I was literally just thinking about it earlier today and here you updated it. That's just creepy. Anyhoo, like I stated in my last review (in 2009 when you last updated this story)I'm not giving you a real reveiw until Sasuke and Naruto actually have some form of interaction, while both or them are consious. But since it's only decent wanted to at least say hi and encourage you to continue.
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm very intrested to see which of the boys remembers and which doesn't! If Sasuke's the one who remembers (my 1st guess) i really don't see how he can be made at Naruto for forgetting after he hit him and concussed him though! LOL! I also like ur highly out of character Kisame (i hate him in the anime).
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I'm all caught up!!
I adore this story and haven't stumbled across it in a long time. I'm glad to have found it again and with so many updates!! Also: Sasuke and Naruto's pathes have finally recrosses!! Eee!!!
Keep up the great work! ~<3
I adore this story and haven't stumbled across it in a long time. I'm glad to have found it again and with so many updates!! Also: Sasuke and Naruto's pathes have finally recrosses!! Eee!!!
Keep up the great work! ~<3
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July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is magnificent! I never read a better one, serious. :). characters are so real, emotional... simply- GREAT. but at the end I'd like to tell you that I'll kill you if you won't show up soon with new chapter!! greetings :*
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June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
halfwit,sounds like hes treating hinata like a dog shed be the frightened chiwawa that pisses itself repeatedly.ususally i like hinata but she really was annoying and useless in the long run of things.does sasuke even recognize naruto?naruto knew who he was really quick even in the eve of getting hit.kisame really is a good guy too bad hes got to deal with so much shit on his plate and kimimaro ouch poor guy the only affection he actually got and its gone and on kisames birthday too.well hope you can update soon cant wait
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June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I feel so sorry for Hinata, having to put up with all this mess. Poor Sasuke for hitting poor Naruto. I still can't wait to see what Sasuke reaction is going to be when he finds out that it was Naruto he hit. As of right now, I like older Sasuke the same as younger Sasuke. Naruto, I'll have to wait to read more about him. But I am sure I will like him the same as older as younger. Looking forward to the next chapter.