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by DevilnBlue

person Allys
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the long ass chapter XD. It was greatly appreciated. This is still one of the cutest stories there is :D, they're so cute when they're chibi's XD. And thank you again for having them get back together, or at least, halfway there. It made my heart hurt when they were mad or sad, congrats for fabulously moving writing!
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww dammit! And it was getting to the good part too! So cute. Poor Naruto. Anyway can't wait for the next update.
person Damp
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! That was so freaking cute! I can't wait for the mext instalment! I just thought it was so damn cute when Naruto screamed Sasuke's name and just huggled him! AWW!! ^^ I am so DYING here, why? 'Cuz I want to see Naruto and Sasuke be friends again!!! It's just not right that they had to seperate like that...but now they're together again! Yay ^^

Please update as soon as you possible can! ^^

-Damp
person Tazeredfrog
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh, who went in his room?! He's gonna be kidnapped ain't he? -gasp-
Aww, Naru-chan is so cute with Baa-chan! -giggles-
Update soon okay? =D
person animehead
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very will written. I assume it is going to be a long one since you seem to be starting them off at a young age (although you haven't supplied their age I assume it's somewhere between 5-8 or around there). Anyway, keep reading if you keep writing and I will review, but understand that they're are people up here who don't review for whatever reason. It is irratating, I know, but loyal reviewers will continue to do so. Just focus on them.
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter but ten-year-olds can sctually speak better than that. They're vocabulary can be better than that even at the age of seven. Just giving you a head-ups there. ;)
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...So sweet...-cries- I just can't wait until a new chapter pops up. This is so great and it makes me wanna hug Naruto and Sasuke so bad. Great job.
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far!.. I'm really enjoying it...^^..

about the lack of reviews, you can't really blame people, the story is set for reviewing for signed in people only and not everyone has an account, or like me, sign in only when they are going to update or work on something.. but we're all still allowed to rate the story...^^... just thought I would let you know.
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww this is such a cute but sad story! I love the little Naruto and Sasuke! :)
person animehead
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really, REALLY, like this story. It has so much in it already. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please keep them coming!