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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story is so good :) Please continue :)
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hm, i just this and i really like it so far. the pace, plot and characterisation are awesome. ^_^ *goes off to read next chapter*
sweetheart, i feel bad that not many people review on ff.net, but you have to remember that there are mostly kids on ff.net. and i think you are really fortunate that you have a great story that so many people like. there are some authors out there who get no reviews, at all. lol. so whenever i feel bad about the hit/review ratio, i tell myself that as long as people keep coming back, im doing something right. like you obviously are. so keep going yeah? ^_^ <3
sweetheart, i feel bad that not many people review on ff.net, but you have to remember that there are mostly kids on ff.net. and i think you are really fortunate that you have a great story that so many people like. there are some authors out there who get no reviews, at all. lol. so whenever i feel bad about the hit/review ratio, i tell myself that as long as people keep coming back, im doing something right. like you obviously are. so keep going yeah? ^_^ <3
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG this was amazing. I hope you can update soon.
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol sasuke really is impatient how can he call poor hinata a halfwit. that was so funny!!
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June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's been a long time since I read this story. I'd given up on there ever being an update but low and behold there've been a couple since I last looked. I am really excited about how it's going so far. Snarky, nasty, and very gay Itachi is sooo fun to read and it's even better when he's drooling after straight Kisame. No wait, I can't say that because Uchihas don't drool, ....or pant, ......or anything that's undignified.
Anyhoo, I only have one complaint. If someone is in an accident the worst thing you can do is move them, especially if they're unconscious. You can cause more damage than the accident itself. Any good lawer worth their salt knows that. Then again, if Kisame has been nothing more than a glorified nursemaid for the Uchihas for the past 12 years that may have slipped his mind.
When there's an update that actually has naruto and Sasuke interacting with eachother (while they are both conscious) I'll review again. Although I'd probably review anyway because it's the decent thing to do.
PS Am I they only one who was hearing "We love you, Miss Hannigan" as Sasuke and Itachi interacted?
Anyhoo, I only have one complaint. If someone is in an accident the worst thing you can do is move them, especially if they're unconscious. You can cause more damage than the accident itself. Any good lawer worth their salt knows that. Then again, if Kisame has been nothing more than a glorified nursemaid for the Uchihas for the past 12 years that may have slipped his mind.
When there's an update that actually has naruto and Sasuke interacting with eachother (while they are both conscious) I'll review again. Although I'd probably review anyway because it's the decent thing to do.
PS Am I they only one who was hearing "We love you, Miss Hannigan" as Sasuke and Itachi interacted?
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May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story! >_<
Even made me cry..lol which is rare so take it as a compliment!
i can't wait for you to update! please please please *_*
Even made me cry..lol which is rare so take it as a compliment!
i can't wait for you to update! please please please *_*
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i like the story so far and enjoy taht while you place the characters in the modern world you still manage to maintain their personalities and some of their attributes(like kimmimaro as the bone doctor). Just curious are you going to make kisame and itachi get together in the long run because i could kind of see that happen as a side pairing.
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
haha, that is one great way of having them reunite. But I love your description of Naruto like a deer in front of headlights. <33
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April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow I was waiting for this chapter for forever!
I'm really happy to see this sotyr is back on track, I've always loved it. Naruto and Sasuke-chibi are just so cute and I can't wait to see how they will finally talk to eachother after all those years.
Please please update soon!
I'm really happy to see this sotyr is back on track, I've always loved it. Naruto and Sasuke-chibi are just so cute and I can't wait to see how they will finally talk to eachother after all those years.
Please please update soon!
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I thought that the end was good. I can't wait to read Sasuke reaction to hitting or almost hitting Naruto. Looking forward tot he next chapter.