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for Promise

by DevilnBlue

person Davey Lockhart
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, how sad.
person Davey Lockhart
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Poor little Naruto.
person Briryan
schedule April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I am glad to see that they finally opened up each other. That would of been hard on both of them to do that. Poor Naruto having to put up with those other kids, good thing he now has Sasuke on his side. Can't wait to see who Naruto picks! Will it be Sasuke or Baa-chan? Looking forward to the next chapter. PS - Sorry for the late review!P
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know I really think this story is put well together. I love your style in writing. And the way you tell the story of both Sasuke and Naruto is to me real moving. I even find myself cheering for the both of them, hoping they will be best friends forever. I can't wait to find out what you got planned for my two favorite boys. And about the cliffies; I think they are a necessary evil. Great job!!!
person Gwyllion
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so very glad to see you updating here! :D What an another great and angsty read. I teared up in most of the moments and my irritation for the bullies who were hurting Naruto. *hugs him to death* I'm so relieved and glad that Sasuke had been there for him all the way. What great support that Naruto needs now. Can't wait to see another coming from you. Keep up the great work! :)
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading your stories and I really like them so far. I like how you portray Naruto as feeling abandoned, and clinging to even a little affection. It really seemed to fit his character. I also like how Kyuubi is portrayed because in the anime he does do terrible things, so I would assume that his demeanor would influence Naruto also. Sasuke personality is perfect. I'm impressed. There are so many people who totally change his character. I'd like to give you some helpful critique, but I really can't think of anything, so keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is excellent. I only just now stumbled on to it, but it really is a gem.

I can't wait until the next chap†er. ^^ Now that they finally made their promise, I'm guessing it will only be a chapter more before a time skip and Sasuke's adoption? Actually, I'm not even going to speculate. This is a great story and I can't wait until all the events unfold in their own time. ^^ Keep up the fantastic work! <3
person numba1yaoigrl
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cute story i iked it a lot cant wait for more, i liked the baby/cave talk because it made the characters ages seem real cuz not many young children speak perfectly. ya kno with jus learnin proper language n all. but i do like this story a lot, what age will they be when they meet up again, and wil u be putting any other naruto characters in the story, i see u already added tsunade shizine(sp) and ten ten. i hope there is more plz update soon
person Yaoigrl12
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ne kawaii love it cant wait for the next chapter.Glad your back.
person Halskr
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. You are putting alot into their relationship prior to the timeskip. It will be interesting to see them as adults, and how they interact with each other. Thanks for writting this.