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by DevilnBlue

schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gah i wanna know what happens next!!!!!!! please update!!!!
person Sue
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want to find out what happens!
person novaline
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Who said you could end the chapter with a cliffie? I want to know what he has to say about naruto.

Great story and please update soon =)
person kagomegirl
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh this was so cute!! update again soon onegai!!
person kai
schedule June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hes what?ive wondered this everytime i read this its eating me from the inside. i was in class one day and we were silently doing a test thing or whatever and i just stand up with my hands on my head and yell"HES WHAT!!!?"lets just say the teacher didnt take that well, i have cleaning duty and aid for a long time for interupting class.teach also said i should see a theropist if i dont stop yelling that and seething when i think noones looking or paying attention,i find out everyone always does.good luck continuing hope he doesnt stay mad long, back to cleaning for me
person Gwyllion
schedule May 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a great fic!!! I am absolutely in love with your Sasunaru! Especially when they are younger. And the cliffie! *dies* I can't wait to read your next installment. Keep up the great work! :D
schedule May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are a very evil person for cutting off where you did.
person hisoka
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hate reading cliff hangers, they make it hard to concintrate work for days until i find out what happens next. but as much as i hate cliff hangers i give you props for keeping people into it,good luck keepning it up.
updates?
person Tazeredfrog
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HIIII I'M BAAAAACK! -swoons for no reason- Yea it was really not a good idea reading this at 1:30am on a school night with a house full of family members staying over for the week. -sweatdrop- when you were describing that Sasuke 'owned' Naruto, it seemed like Sasuke had a whole flipping book of rules, long story short, I burst out laughing so hard I woke up the whole house. They weren't that pleased. -faints-
GAH! When I wrote the review for the last chaper I forgot to add Happy Birthday -dies- REZ PLZ. -rez- So Happy be-lated birthday! (I've said that twice today, I forgot a neighbours birthday)
SCOOBY DOO! Oh man, I LOVED that show when I was a kid! -laughs- oh the good ole' days.
You make it seem like Sasuke is going to forget all about Naru-chan and side with those demon childern. -seethes- I'm looking forward to the angst-makes me all giddy. I'm such a sadist.- but I'm scared as well. I'm really a coward. -cries-
Anyways, STUPID CLIFFY. -sobs- I'll deal I'll deal, you don't take long to update, which is FREAKING AWESOME! I've been waiting for some chapters to stories for at least 2 MONTHS. I feel like I'll die if I don't get the next chapter soon, but that's just me hahahaha. Okay so I'm totally delerious. Sleep, need sleep.
Ja!
schedule May 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Naruto!! But I think Sasuke is going to tell those other kids off and then go hunt for Naruto. Great chapter, I loved it! :)